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zabimaru_08
07-16-2008, 06:44 PM
Hosted by Zabi and BB
This RP is not based on any anime.
This is a mix of elements i've seen in anime plus my own imagination.
The plot is revealed lower down this page. First of all i'd like to explain the demon clans. There is four clans in this RP, Three 'true' clans and one rogue clan. The 3 true clans have their own "clan ability" this ability is unique to the clan.
so here's the four demon clans...
Elemental Demon:
These demons look like humans. Their clan ability is control of the elements. Each member will control 2 of the 4 main elements (earth, water, fire and air). The stronger the demon, the more control they will have over their chosen elements, therefore the stronger their elemental attacks and defence will be. These demons tend to be quick thinkers. The strongest of the elemental demon are known for their terrifying eyes. When in battle if an elemental demon releases his or hers full power their eyes turn a certain colour, to represent what element they are using (from the 2 they have mastered). For example, the demon who have mastered the element of water, their eyes will turn completely blue.
Things to consider: Only the strongest of the elemental demon have full control over their chosen elements. The elemental demon have to be careful as their powers are limited, they can’t keep throwing fire balls all day. Like all demons they can run out of energy, the stronger the demon the more energy they have. Also, although you choose two of the four main elements you‘re not restricted to it‘s original form. For example if you choose water, you also have the ability to manipulate and control ice. Because ice is a form of water. Another example, if you control fire you can also use smoke, there’s no smoke without a fire. And finally, only the Clan Commander has mastered ALL of the four elements.
Velocidad Demon:
These demons look like normal humans. Their clan ability is break neck speed. Speed varies depending on how strong the clan member is. The average clan member moves at a speed where other demons can see their movements, but their body will struggle to keep up. The Velocidad Demon or ‘speed demon’ has a ‘released’ or ‘true’ form that usually resembles a werewolf/lycan. When in this form their speed vastly increases, making it even more difficult to keep up. This transformation also increases their durability, meaning they can take more attacks and last longer during battle.
Things to consider: The Velocidad demon has to keep an eye on stamina, they can only speed around for so long before running out of energy. The stronger the demon, the longer they can last. Only the clan commander has mastered the clan ability of speed. Also, the ‘true’ form of the Velocidad demon is only available to the strongest members of the clan. It is accessible to the more inexperienced members but is uncontrollable and will most likely result in their death (due to the amount of energy it takes up).
Zhan Shi Demon:
These demon appear mostly human but have ‘demonic traits’ like horns or a demon arm or a tail etc. Their clan ability is enchanted weapons. These weapons tend to have a personality of their own and are used as a partner rather than a tool. The weapons in their sealed state seem normal, bows, staffs, spears, large shuriken and swords etc. But when released they have their own ability and form.
Things to consider: Again, energy level. Your weapons released form can only last so long before draining all of your energy. Weapons cannot have similar traits to other clan abilities. For example your weapon cannot control ice or increase your speed. When released It can turn into a giant frog who carries a massive samurai sword and breathes poison or it can simply cover you in armour. As long as it doesn’t seem to ‘inherit’ other clans abilities then that’s fine. Also as you grow stronger so does your weapon. Only the Clan Commander has mastered his weapon and only he can use 100% of its power.
The Rogue Demon
These demon left their clan and joined together. Their main goal was for each member to be able to control and eventually master each clan ability. This Rogue clan is lead by the former commander of the Velocidad demon. Each member has their blood ability and secondary ability. Their Blood ability is the ability they already had. For example the commader of the rogues is the former commander of the velocidad. Therefore his blood ability is the velocidads incredible speed. The secondary ability you choose from the remaining two clans.
Things to consider: First of all...do i even need to say it? Remember you have energy levels. Also remember that your Blood ability will be equal to the others in your clan(depending on your level) but your secondary ability will be only half as powerful as it usually is. Because it is not your original ability. Only the commander has a secondary ability that is close to being as powerful as it should be.
Plot:
The demon clans had lived for centuries as friends and allies. Until a rogue clan appeared. This clan was not one of the ‘true’ clans, but a mix of all three. It had members from the Velocidad clan, members from the Elemental clan and members from the Zhan Shi clan. This new clan had two main goals. The first was to find a way to fuse their abilities making it possible for each member to have the ability of all three of the true clans. The second was after attaining all of the abilities, to wipe out the three true clans. The three true clans worked together, trying to find a way too capture or destroy this rogue clan. When their first plan failed the 3 true clans began to argue over who was to blame for the failure of the plan. This started a war between the 4 clans. The 3 true clans and the fourth rogue clan.
Setting:
The world we’re fighting in is identical to earth. It looks the same and works the same. The major difference is that our world has one giant piece of land, the rest of the world is water with very small islands dotted around. These islands are the size of a city(at most). Most are uninhabited but some are home to various wildlife and demon creatures that are not within the four clans. The four clans are situated on the main piece of land. This land is around the size of America. The far north being covered in snowy mountains. The middle being a vast forest full of various wildlife. And the south is a massive desert with heat during the day that could kill you in a matter of hours if you don’t have water. The North is home to the Velocidad demon. The velocidad live in the west of the mountains (where the mountains reach their highest). The south is home too the Elemental demon and Zhan Shi demon. The elemental demon live in the west and the Zhan Shi demon in the east. The fourth clan has no specific home but they tend to hideout in the massive forest area in the middle, this forest was a no-mans land. This is where clans would send out teams to find food and other resources. Because their isn’t a lot to eat in the desert or mountains. The forest is also a constant war zone, as clans often bump into each other when gathering supplies.
More info on the areas:
The mountains: These mountains get colder the higher you go up. The peak of the mountains are covered in snow.
There isn’t much wildlife. At the base and in the middle you will find hares and the occasional bird. The only other wildlife that is seen is the mountain lion, but these are very rare.
The Velocidad demon live in a long series of caves that have a meeting point that comes out to a large fortress made from the surrounding rock of the mountains.
The Forest: The forest weather varies every day, from cold and wet to hot and humid. The forest is massive and stretches from the north mountains all the way to the border of the southern desert.
The forest is full of wildlife and plants. This forest is not home to any of the Demon clans but is regularly used by them to collect food and other resources. It is also where most fights take place.
The Desert: This sand covered land goes on for miles. It is extremely hot during the night time and even hotter during the day. Within the sand is the threat of sand demons. These are usually massive sand coloured snakes. They camouflage themselves well and the snakes can range from 6ft in length to 20ft in length.
The Zhan Shi demon live in the east and the elemental demon in the west. The Zhan Shi demon live underground as do the elemental demon. This is primarily too protect themselves from sand storms.
zabimaru_08
07-16-2008, 06:46 PM
Application
Name: (the name of your character)
Age: (the age of your character - this is similar to S.S age in bleach, although you may look 30 you could be 200 - demons live for a long time)
Clan: (which clan are you in?)
Rank: Commander(leader of a clan) has to have over 1000 posts (to prove you‘re active). The commander of Rogues and Velocidad has already been chosen. Lieutenants (commanders right hand man/women) must have over 500 posts. After that there is only Officer (strongest members) and Recruits (weaker members). If you are not a commander or lieutenant then your rank will be chosen for you. So just write here what you think you should be - rookie or officer.
Appearance: (what your character looks like)
Biography: (Very brief history of your character, how he/she grew up. How they feel about the other clans etc.)
Personality: (Very Brief description of your personality)
Specialties: Note: These are NOT the same as clan abilities. All abilities/specialties depend on your characters strength.
What I mean by this is if a strong member of a clan chooses strength as his specialty and a weaker member also chooses it, the strong member will still be stronger.
The weaker member will just be stronger than other members of his level from the various clans (as long as they haven’t chosen it too)
Choose two of these four abilities as a specialty;
Hand to hand combat: Increases martial arts skill, your hand to hand combat capabilities.
Swordsmanship: The name is a little deceiving as this doesn’t just mean your skill with a sword but your skill with all weapons like that. E.G a sword, a staff, sai, an axe, etc.
Throwing weapons: Increases your skill with throwing knifes and shurikens etc.
Bow: Increases your skill with a basic bow and arrow and the crossbow.
Now choose two of these abilities as your other specialties;
Agility; Makes you more agile so you can jump across tree branches and dodge multiple attacks etc.
Speed; Makes you faster. Keep in mind, even if you choose speed as a ‘specialty’. You still won’t be as fast as the strongest members of the Velocidad demon. But you’ll be able to keep up with the weaker members.
Strength: Makes you stronger. Demons tend to be strong already, much stronger than humans. But this increases your strength.
Stealth: Increases your ability to surprise your opponent and to follow them unnoticed. Making less noise when you move and strategically hiding within the landscape.
Now this is the complicated part of the app. You will fill out the second part depending on which clan you are joining.
Velocidad Clan: All you have to do is give us a description of your released form (if you’re strong enough to have it) remember it should look similar to a werewolf/lycan.
Elemental Clan: List the 2 elements you control. Also list your full power attack and defence. Like it says in the clan description when the strongest of the elemental clan release their full power their eyes turn the colour of the element they are controlling. So not only do your normal attacks increase in power but you should have one special attack and one special defence based on your elements that you can only use when in full power.
Zhan Shi Clan: Describe your weapon in it’s sealed state (is it a staff? Sword? Shuriken etc) also describe its released form and abilities. Remember the abilities can’t be the same as any of the clan abilities (in other words it can’t control elements or increase your speed.)
Rogue Clan: Read this carefully. List which clan you are originally from and which clan ability you’re having as your secondary ability. Then use the above sections to describe both abilities. For example if you are originally from the Velocidad look above and fill out their description. Then if you choose elemental clan as your secondary ability look above and fill out that description also. Remember you cannot access the full power of your secondary ability.
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I will fill out my own APP shortly.
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Name: Kenryuu (Ryuu for short)
Age: appears to be in his late 30's to early 40's, he's around 120 years old.
Clan: Velocidad
Rank: Commander
Appearance: He stands at just over 6ft. He has metal armour covering his left arm (from his elbow to just before his wrist), and is usually seen carrying a katana.
http://i36.tinypic.com/ehirld.jpg
Biography: He grew up with no parents. His grandfather raised him and trained him. His grandfather was the commander of the Velocidad for 200 years. The grandfather died when Ryuu was an officer. Not long after his death Ryuu became lieutenant. Now he's the commander and has been for several years.
Personality: He is loyal to his clan and perceives them as his family. He is usually seen as being quite friendly and helpful. But has a temper that when emerges, terrifies even the strongest of soldiers.
Specialties:
- Hand to hand combat
- Swordsmanship
- Agility
- Strength
Released Form: http://www.genv.net/files/gallery_images/lycan_0.jpg
Riichan
07-16-2008, 10:00 PM
Name:Karboon
Age: looks to be late teen, acturally 108 years old
Clan: Zhan Shi
Rank: officer/recruit, but ide rather be an officer ( go figure, who wants to be weak? =D)
Apperance: hair is short and green in most places but there is a hedge of longer hair starting in the middles of the head curving 2 inches fro the top of the dome back to the center in the back( like a mohawk gone wrong ^^)
his body is slender and long, he stands at 6'4" his cloths are baggy and a light tan color. he always wears a white scarf around his neck. he has blood red what seem to be scales running up and down his spine and beside these scales are what look like an infected wound but is just red skin.
Biography: was born first and only, has alwasy had bloodlust since his first fight. since then has become even nicer but less social.
Personality: doesnt talk much but when he does its always fun and cheerful.
Specialties:
-swordsmanship
-hand to hand
-agility
-speed
sealed form: its a nagatana with a spear head on the oposite end.( the blade is 1'6" long and the spear head is only 5 inches long) also the blades on both sides are of pure silver, allowing them to reflect light very well. and also the handle which is 3 feet long is a burble (between, purple and blue)
Realeased: i seems to disapear for a second and when i reapear in a haze. i am covered in a burble scale armor, but its attached to me. i now have a tail, talons, and wings,and the "helmet" completly covers my face i have the face that looks much like a cat (minus the wiskers) my eyes glow completly white. as for melee purposes, it gives me a pair of crimson red claw like gauntlets
my swords ability is simply put, it creates illusions. the stronger i get the more intense, better, more belevaible the illusions will become.
BladeBreaker
07-16-2008, 10:27 PM
Name:Vergil Diavolo
Age: 199, looks to be only in his late twenties due to having to survive in the wilderness
Clan: Rouge Clan
Rank: Commander
Appearance:
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i133/Dante803/Bankaicave.jpg
He has a large scar over his right eye from his last fight as the Velocidad leader against Kenryuu, his blades are the one seen in the pic handed down to him from his father.
Biography:He was once the commander of the Velocidad and as time passed people sought to challenge him for leadership of the clan, they all wanted to rule it differently then he. One by one they fell before him till his own lieutenant, Kenryuu(Yes Zabi's character), challenged him for the throne. He was beaten to an inch of his life, he did not submit but everyone knew he was beaten and knew in tradtion he was to die, but intead of granting him the embrace of death, Kenryuu showed mercy but exiled him from the clan forcing him to have to survive in the wild. His time in the wild forced him to build his body up cauging time to slow his ageing as well as it made him closer to the earth herself and aloowing him to gain conrtol over the element of earth. As time passed he assembeld those who were exiled and those who left into the rouge clan and soon began trianing them to control their inner potential and learn abilites of the other clans.
Personality:Despite the fact that he was exiled from his clan his personality has not changed. He's layed back and relaxed but close to completly closed off from his emotions. He is very smart but from just looking at him one would guess different. He has a high repsect for the world around him and will be thrown into a fit of rage should it me filthied.
Specialties:
-Swordsmanship
-Hand-to-hand
-Agilty
-Stregnth
Blood Trait-(His primary abitly from his orignal clan)
Transformed state
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn221/59WOLF/barbaricwolf.jpg?t=1215748699
Secondary triat-(His sencdon abilty as a rouge)
-Elemental conrtol over Earth.
darkland8
07-16-2008, 11:15 PM
Name: Indu Shikari
Age: 17
Clan: Rogue
Rank: second in command (is that ok XD)
Appearance: 6'1", long black hair down to his chest, has two 3" long tan horns, and a black devil tail. is tan skinned
Biography: He left the Zhan Shi clan with his father when he was 12 and joined the Rogue clan with him. there he learned the way of the Elemental Clan. I slowly worked my way up the ranks and became second in command. (Ya not much to it)
Personality: He's a care free guy who is kind to anyone who is kind in return. He can be quite patient with peoples screw ups, just don't keep him waiting! He also knows when it's 'play time' and 'work time' and can be quite serous when necessary. He's also quite reliable. he has a bad sense of humor and love fooling around with people.
Specialties:
- Hand to hand combat
- Swordsmanship
- Spell casting
- Raises animals (ha ha ha i gota have a familiar =p)
Weapons(blood):
Dagger: it can change it's shape into any weapon.
Throwing Knives (9): these hone in onto a target of Indu's choice, but stop once the hit something
Elements(secondary): Fire, Wind
BladeBreaker
07-16-2008, 11:34 PM
Darkland a couple things.
1. You don't have the post requirement to be 2nd in command.
2. Please stick to these for you're specialties. I know you like to have magic and stuff bt you have to stick to them, Zabi's Rules.
2 of these
Hand to hand combat: Increases martial arts skill, your hand to hand combat capabilities.
Swordsmanship: The name is a little deceiving as this doesn’t just mean your skill with a sword but your skill with all weapons like that. E.G a sword, a staff, sai, an axe, etc.
Throwing weapons: Increases your skill with throwing knifes and shurikens etc.
Bow: Increases your skill with a basic bow and arrow and the crossbow.
and 2 of these
Agility; Makes you more agile so you can jump across tree branches and dodge multiple attacks etc.
Speed; Makes you faster. Keep in mind, even if you choose speed as a ‘specialty’. You still won’t be as fast as the strongest members of the Velocidad demon. But you’ll be able to keep up with the weaker members.
Strength: Makes you stronger. Demons tend to be strong already, much stronger than humans. But this increases your strength.
Stealth: Increases your ability to surprise your opponent and to follow them unnoticed. Making less noise when you move and strategically hiding within the landscape.
and
3. Your blood traits must be a trait from the clan of origin. You can have the dagger that can transform to any weapon in it's realsed form.
But I'm not 100% sure about the throwing knives, so I'll leave that to Zabi.
darkland8
07-17-2008, 03:04 AM
Name: Indu Shikari
Age: 17
Clan: Rogue
Rank: Recruit
Appearance: 6'1", long black hair down to his chest, has two 3" long tan horns, and a black devil tail. is tan skinned
Biography: He left the Zhan Shi clan with his father when he was 12 and joined the Rogue clan with him. there he learned the way of the Elemental Clan. (Ya not much to it)
Personality: He's a care free guy who is kind to anyone who is kind in return. He can be quite patient with peoples screw ups, just don't keep him waiting! He also knows when it's 'play time' and 'work time' and can be quite serous when necessary. He's also quite reliable. he has a bad sense of humor and love fooling around with people.
Specialties:
- Throwing Weapons
- Swordsmanship
- Agility
- Strength
Weapons(blood):
Dagger: it can change it's shape into any weapon.
(if it's ok) Throwing Knives (9): these hone in onto a target of Indu's choice, but stop once the hit something
Elements(secondary): Fire, Wind
(he he he sorry for the changes... Thanks for informing me of my mess up BB i really appreciate it ^^)
ra muerute
07-17-2008, 03:50 AM
my iPod touch has some sort of timelimit on how long I can post so I have to do this application in two posts. Sorry.
Name: raiden arai
Age: 20's but he is really 95
Clan: Zhun Shi
Rank: as high as I can get.
Appearance: 6"3' with demon wings. He wears only traveling pants. Hehas a ripped tone. He also has a scar traveling from the top of hi forhead to his right ear where a chunk of it is missing.
Biography: he entered the Zhun Shi clan when he was a boy. He has steadily rose the ranks since his join to where he is right now. He lost a chunk of his right ear in a battle against the rougues during the war.
Personality: he is constantly thinking of ways to better himself. His loyalty and devotion to the Zhun Shi clan knows no bounds. He does not let words effect him unless they are his commander's.
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here is the second part of my application.
Specialties:
•Can I have double swordsmanship
•Agility
•Strength
Weapon:
sealed form: it is a 8" long spear. It has two feet of blade and six feet of shaft. The shaft is pure white. There is a strand of white silk attached tithe end of the shaft.
released form: the spear grows to be ten feet long. The last two feet of the spear slide up my arm and cover my body. When my body is completely covered(except for the demon part) I have a shiny white suit of armor on. Then the strand of silk detatches from the shaft and floats up to my demon part and covers it with a liquid. This liquid is as strong as the armor but it moves so my demon part can move freely.
zabimaru_08
07-17-2008, 09:54 AM
Riichan/Karboon
Accepted. since your clan doesn't have a commander yet i'll be handing out the ranks. You'll be a recruit for now but your commander (when you get one) can change that later. Only reason i'm making you a recruit is because you have under 100 posts and i'm not sure how active you'll be.
Darland/Indu Shikari
Approved. Your clan commander will give you your rank. Your dagger that can transform into any weapon is fine. It's perfect for a former zhan shi member. However i'm not sure about the throwing knifes. Normal throwing knifes and shuriken are allowed to anyone, but because these seem to be enchanted as well as your dagger i can't allow it. But you could always have one of your daggers forms as a large shuriken or multiple throwing knifes. I would allow that since it's part of your enchanted knife and just one of its forms. Remember normal throwing knifes and shuriken are allowed too. They just can't have powers.
ra muerute/ raiden arai
Accepted. Although i would prefer it if you choose another specialty instead of having double swordsmanship. But i'll get back to you on that after i've had time to think about it. Be prepared to choose another specialty though, just incase. The rest of your APP was fine, since you don't have a commander yet i'll be handing out the rankings. I'll make you an Officer but remember when you get a commander they can change your rank if they want too(based on your activity).
BB
FAIL...if you fell for that then i'm dissapointed in you lol. btw give darkland a ranking.
BladeBreaker
07-17-2008, 03:25 PM
You Almost got me Zabi almost. And Darkland, casue you put it on your app I rank you recruit so Yea.
Quincyboy
07-17-2008, 06:20 PM
Hey reserve the elemental demon commander position for me!!!!! I'm about to go on vacation until Sunday so I don't have time for an application. Grrrrrr bad timing!
BladeBreaker
07-17-2008, 06:52 PM
In my opion I belive we should reserve the spot for him Zabi becasue I know Quincy from another RP besideds the shinigami rebellion one and he's a good RPer and a good leader. But as I said that's my opion I don't know about your's, and being as how this was all you're idea you technically have the final decesion.
zabimaru_08
07-17-2008, 07:04 PM
Quincyboy/Kyu is the Elemental Clan Commander. (glad to see you accepted my invitation)
I want at the very least a commander and one member for each clan before starting this RP.
vale of the gate
07-17-2008, 08:19 PM
Name: kasa minara
Age: looks 16 actually 145
Clan: elemental
Rank:rookie or officer.
Appearance: a 5'8" muscular boy,sleek black hair silver framed glasses
and a tattoo of a red wolf
Biography: was born in the depths of a dark cave and lived
a hard working live among the humans,until one day a flame shot
from his hand burning down the fields.he ran from the human
settlement and now resides with his bretheren learning how to control
his abilities. he gives no feeling toward the other clans what so ever
Personality: a silly still young man with a happy,let
it roll and see what happens kind of man,but with an air of intensity.
Specialties: hand to hand
throwing weapons
agility
strength
elements: these are the two elements i control:fire, earth
full fire attack and defense: fire spear,a javelin of flame
forms in my hand to be thrown. defense ash shield:the ashes
from what i burned form around me and make a 6 ft tall shield
full earth attack and defense: stone pier: sharp stone pillars
come out of the ground,defense:sand snake: several ropes
of sand lay on the ground and hinder my attacker
special attack and defense:magma wave combines my two
elements into a fast moving wave of lava.
special defense:lava wall: i can pull back the wave into a self
moving wall of lava
Jlsloane
07-18-2008, 01:02 AM
Name: Jerren "Libra" Asmus
Age: Appears approximately 40-ish. True age is in fact several centuries. Estimated to be around 500 years old. It is a true mystery how it is that he is still living...
Clan: Zhan Shi
Rank: Well, I don't really feel right saying "Oh, I wanna be leader!" If leader is open, I'll take it. If not, I'll take an "advisor" position.
Appearance: He appears around 40. His hair is thin and black, almost chalky to the touch. His eyes are a steel gray and his mouth is always set strongly, determinedly. He wears a Auron-style (Auron as in the FFX character) cloak, except it is a deep gray color. Along his belt, he carries a silver sphere, about palm size, his weapon...
Biography: He has long been a part of the Zhan Shi, though nobody truly knows his past. All that would know it are long dead. He is a relic from ancient times and possesses knowledge of both great and terrible mysteries of the world. For the past 100 years, he has vanished without a trace, supposedly for training on one of the far isles. And now he is back... Different... Stronger. Wiser. He is now a true weapon master. Nearly any weapon feels at ease in his hands, able to be used with its maximum potential, his own special weapon or not...
Personality: He does not talk much, but when he does, it always means something. He does not take jokes lightly and has little to no sense of humor. Life is a serious thing to Jerren. His sense of justice has earned him the nickname "Libra," an ancient word for the scales of justice.
Specialties:
-Swordsmanship
-Throwing weapons
-Strength
-Agility
Weapon:
Sealed State: In its sealed state, the weapon is simply a solid silver sphere, made out of a very peculiar, flowing metal. It is held in a special holster designed especially for Jerren, pinned to his left side where his hand can easily reach it in a matter of miliseconds. It has no special abilities in this state, nor can it do much in combat.
First Release: The sphere glows bright silver before shifting, becoming any weapon that Jerren desires. The weapon can shift incredibly fast, allowing for incredible combat techniques and combos. Because this ability is not incredibly deadly either, it requires very little energy to maintain, as it is primarily Jerren's incredible skills that give him his combat prowess. Should the weapon shift to a throwing weapon, it reappears in Jerren's hand seconds after it is thrown.
Second Release: The sphere reforms. Holding it out, Jerren crunches it in his hands, scattering it into silver shards. These shards then float and move in accordance to Jerren's complex hand motions, creating a veritable wave of destruction that runs to Jerren's own commands.
Third Release: The sphere reforms once more and Jerren shoves it within himself. Energy spills throughout his body as the beast within roars with power. His agility, strength and overall skills increase several-fold. Jerren can know launch powerful blasts of light from his hands as well as form weapons of light for use in combat. These light weapons are stronger than normal weapons and can easily cut through steel.
kasai
07-18-2008, 04:15 AM
Name: Maverick
Age: He looks to be about 19, but is acutally close to 85 years old
Clan: Velocidad
Rank: Leiutenant or officer
Appearance: Maverick is about 6'6 feet tall, with white hair. He usually wears a red trench coat and has steel guantlets. He has a katana slung around his back, with an unstrung bow tied to the sheath.
http://planetrenders.net/renders/albums/userpics/37166/Archer_render.png
Biography: Maverick grew up outside of the main Velocodid caves, at the base of the mountains. When he turned 17 he decided to move to the main fortress, and try to earn some money to send back to his parents. He ended up joining the army.
Personality: Maverick has always been lazy, but when it comes to fighting hes always on top of things. He usually has a cocky attitude, and is a sore loser.
Specialties:
-Swordmanship
-Bow
-Stealth
-Strength
Released Form:
http://www.webspawner.com/users/flamekitty84/WereGarurumon.jpg
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Quincyboy
07-18-2008, 04:33 AM
Application
Name: Lord Vilcente
Age: (the age of your character - Appears to be in his 70s. In other word he's really old. His true age is unknown
Clan: Elemental demons (commonly) the Valinya (Formally)
Rank: Commander
Appearance: Lord Vilcente is completly bald. His face is wrinkleless but the age is apparent. He has a white beard that is about 3 inches long and pointed. He is 6ft tall but often hunched over making him appear shorter. He wears a robe of the purest white and around the robe is an ornate mantle of gold featuring the crest of the Valinya in the front. The crest is a diamond shape with a symbol of each of the elements in the corners. He has a staff of unknown matierial that is white in color. Atop the staff is a large crystalike diamond shaped gem. His eyes are perpetually white(like storm when she uses her powers), a constant reminder of the fact he has mastered all four elements.
Biography: Lord Vilcente's past is completly unknown. No demon can remember a time where he was not the commander of the elemental demons. He is the only demon to have mastered all four elements and guards there secrets closely. He has kept the elemental demons a isolationist group and views the rouges attempt to steal the secrets of the elements as near sacriligious.
Personality: He is a wise and kind elder but like most elders is stern and forceful when the rules are broken. This is he when amongst his people however. When among the other demon clans he is stubborn, resolute, and suspicious. He won't be swayed easily and prefers to keep his people out of foreign affairs
Specialty:
Swordmanship
Hand to HandStealth
agility
I'm not putting anything down for his elemental powers cause he's the commander.
darkland8
07-18-2008, 05:03 AM
Name: Maverick
Age: He looks to be about 19, but is acutally close to 85 years old
Clan: Velocidad
Rank: Leiutenant or officer
Appearance: Maverick is about 6'6 feet tall, with white hair. He usually wears a red trench coat and has steel guantlets. He has a katana slung around his back, with an unstrung bow tied to the sheath.
http://planetrenders.net/renders/albums/userpics/37166/Archer_render.png
Biography: Maverick grew up outside of the main Velocodid caves, at the base of the mountains. When he turned 17 he decided to move to the main fortress, and try to earn some money to send back to his parents. He ended up joining the army.
Personality: Maverick has always been lazy, but when it comes to fighting hes always on top of things. He usually has a cocky attitude, and is a sore loser.
Specialties:
-Swordmanship
-Bow
-Stealth
-Strength
Released Form:
http://www.webspawner.com/users/flamekitty84/WereGarurumon.jpg
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lol wow 'Fate Stay Night' and 'Digimon' what a combination ha ha ha. youe you picked the right character to look like, Archer rocks ^^ (I only wish i knew his real name...)
kasai
07-18-2008, 05:07 AM
lol i havnt seen Fate stay night, but i thought that the digimon looks like an awesome werewolf
BladeBreaker
07-18-2008, 05:37 AM
-Hmmm Vale you're good nothing wrong with you're app.
-Captain Jlsloane you're looks good but I'm not 100% sure about your weapon Zabi will have to look at it.
-Kasi your's looks good
-Qunicy you've already been Accpeted pretty much
So you guys know This is not a final say, I may be cohost but Zabi did most of the work so I think it's only fair that he has final say on if you're in or not
darkland8
07-18-2008, 06:54 AM
lol i havnt seen Fate stay night, but i thought that the digimon looks like an awesome werewolf
Well you should! it's AWESOME... i had to stop befor i finished it though... i'll have to go back to it one of these days...
zabimaru_08
07-18-2008, 08:36 AM
BB can you deal with all the Rogue applications that come in? share the workload lol.
ra muerute/ raiden arai - I've decided you can't have double swordsmanship, choose another specialty please.
Vale/kasa minara Accepted. Your Commander (QB) will give you your rank, you have more than enough posts to prove yourself active enough for Lieutenant, but it's your commanders choice.
JLsloane/Jerren "Libra" Asmus -
I don't quite understand your second release, do the shards cut the opponent? it seems fine i just want to make sure i know what it does lol. Your third release might be too much, when you say "overall skills increase several-fold" are you including speed? because your weapon can't have abilities that are similar to clan abilities (e.g the velocidads speed). The weapon made from light is fine. If you're excluding speed then i'm okay with the increase in ability. But this increase should drain more energy than normal so you can't use it constantly (otherwise you would be overpowered). And maybe you should limit your weapon of light ability to a set number of forms/weapons - rather than a mysterious unknown number of forms.
If you're prepared to compromise a little then just edit/re-post your weapon section and i'll be happy to make you commander of the Zhan Shi.
Kasai/Maverick
Accepted. You are the lieutenant of the Velocidad.
Quincyboy/Lord Vilcente
Accepted. Commander of the Elemental/Valinya Clan
Clan Members List
Elemental:
Commander - Quincyboy/Lord Vilcente
Lieutenant - Vale/kasa minara(could change soon)
Officer -
Recruit -
Velocidad:
Commader - Zabi/Kenryuu
Lieutenant - Kasai/Maverick
Officer -
Recruit -
Zhan Shi:
Commander - JLsloane/Jerren "Libra" Asmus(until i hear back from you)
Lieutenant -
Officer(s) - ra muerute/ raiden arai
Recruit(s) - Riichan/Karboon
Rogue:
Commander - BladeBreaker/Vergil Diavolo
Lieutenant -
Officer -
Recruit - Darland/Indu Shikari
hope i didn't forget anyone.
I'll give it one more day then start the RP. People can still join after we've started.(obviously)
Leese
07-18-2008, 09:30 AM
Name: Akane (No last name)
Age: She appears to be 15, but is really 54
Clan: Elemental Clan
Rank: Officer
Appearance:
http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s171/_-Leese-_/animedemongirl.jpgIgnore the staff and dragon. XD
Biography: Akane grew up without parents, never knowing who they were or what became of them. She lived alone as a member of the Elemental clan and has trained herself to hopefully one day seek out her parents. She believes the war between the clans to be none of her concern, but has agreed to take part in it anyways.
Personality: Akane is very independent and prefers to do things by herself. She avoids interaction with others whenever possible. She can be very stubborn but would do anything for the good of her Clan. Even though she tends to want to do things "her way," Akane is extremely obedient of authority and would never question her leader.
Specialties:
Throwing Weapons
Hand to Hand Combat
Agility
Speed
Elements:
Fire and Air
Fire Attack: Flame's Rebuke
Creates 2 long whips of fire that are controlled by hand motions and used to lash out at opponents.
Fire Defense: Flame's Obstruction
This creates a wall of fire to block any attacks coming from the direction the wall is facing. (This can be used multiple times at once to block from several directions, but would take a lot of energy.)
Air Attack: Wind's Rage
Creates drill-like gust of wind controlled by hand motions. The gust is powerful enough to pierce an opponent.
Air Defense: Wind's Refuge
Causes a gust of wind to spiral around Akane, deflecting any projectiles (such as throwing knives or arrows) coming her way.
Special Attack (A combonation of both elements): Flame's Storm
Creates a drill-like spiral of Wind and Flame flying towards an opponent, controlled my hand motions.
I really hope I did this right. This is my first try at roleplaying. If there's anything I need to correct please let me know~! ><
Jlsloane
07-18-2008, 11:45 AM
Yes, the shards do indeed slice the opponent :p Well, yeah, overall skills improve in accordance with the rules, eh? So, no speed increase. And yeah, I figured that the increase in energy drain was a given. And yeah, I'll limit my weapons to only close combat weapons and some throwing weapons (i.e. kunai, shurikens, bladed boomerangs). No bows or whatnot. Is this suitable?
zabimaru_08
07-18-2008, 12:42 PM
yeah that's perfect^ welcome to the clans commander. :p
Leese/Akane
Accepted. Your commander will give you your rank
Clan Members List Update
Elemental:
Commander - Quincyboy/Lord Vilcente
Lieutenant - Vale/kasa minara(could change soon)
Officer -
Recruit -
Awaiting Rank - Leese/Akane
Velocidad:
Commader - Zabi/Kenryuu
Lieutenant - Kasai/Maverick
Officer -
Recruit -
Zhan Shi:
Commander - JLsloane/Jerren "Libra" Asmus
Lieutenant -
Officer(s) - ra muerute/ raiden arai
Recruit(s) - Riichan/Karboon
Rogue:
Commander - BladeBreaker/Vergil Diavolo
Lieutenant -
Officer -
Recruit - Darland/Indu Shikari
hope i didn't forget anyone.
BladeBreaker
07-18-2008, 05:28 PM
I'll take the Rouge apps. So far I've just bee readin over people's apps. to look for errors, then I let them know if there are any so they can fix them.
zabimaru_08
07-18-2008, 05:59 PM
I'll take the Rouge apps. So far I've just bee readin over people's apps. to look for errors, then I let them know if there are any so they can fix them.
yeah that's fine, i appreciate it. As long as you're okay with accepting/denying any rogue applications we get.
BladeBreaker
07-18-2008, 07:43 PM
Ok, will do Zabi.
I will do it, MUHAHAHAHAHA.......I mean YAY!!!
zabimaru_08
07-19-2008, 03:24 PM
The RP is now up. I forgot to mention this in the thread so i'll do it here, apart from the usual rules(no god-moding etc) i have another rule, could everyone please wait at least two posts after their last before posting again.
ra muerute
07-20-2008, 04:34 AM
k sounds fair to me!
zabimaru_08
07-20-2008, 09:45 AM
ATTENTION
to help us out i've decided to give each area an official name, you have two names you can call each place by.
The Snowy Mountains / The Northen Mountains.
The mountains: These mountains get colder the higher you go up. The peak of the mountains are covered in snow. The Velocidad demon live in a long series of caves that have a meeting point that comes out to a large fortress made from the surrounding rock of the mountains.
The Kuro Forest / The dark forest.
The Forest: The forest weather varies every day, from cold and wet to hot and humid. The forest is massive and stretches from the north mountains all the way to the border of the southern desert.
The forest is full of wildlife and plants. This forest is not home to any of the Demon clans but is regularly used by them to collect food and other resources. It is also where most fights take place.
The Golden Desert / The Southern Desert.
The Desert: This sand covered land goes on for miles. It is extremely hot during the night time and even hotter during the day. Within the sand is the threat of sand demons. These are usually massive sand coloured snakes. They camouflage themselves well and the snakes can range from 6ft in length to 20ft in length.
The Zhan Shi demon live in the east and the elemental demon in the west. The Zhan Shi demon live underground as do the elemental demon. This is primarily too protect themselves from sand storms.
and just a little reminder there is a large distance between these places you can't jump to and from each place in a matter of minutes. It would take a while to travel to each.
Blackout
07-20-2008, 02:03 PM
Application
Name: Joel Dawson (easy name for me to remember)
Age: looks to be 25, but in reality is 200
Clan: Zhan Shi
Rank: Lieutenant
Appearance: He has long, thick, black hair, and his eyes are a deep red. His clothes are like Sephiroth's (Yes, the Sephiroth from FF7).
Biography: He was taught by one of most talented swordsmen in the entire village. He survived through quite a few attacks on his clan, however, that only made him love it even more. Each time they were attacked, the clan always pulled him through. However, now he wishes to repay his clan by defending it.
Personality: Fighting for him has only to reasons, for fun, and for protecting his clan. However, fighting for fun seems to have gotten quite boring. He is quite an intelligent person. He has a deep care for his clan, so much so that whenever it is being attacked, he becomes pissed and starts a rampage. However, that doesn't mean he has lost his mind. He has respect for his commander, but not the overwhelming, annoying kind.
Specialties: Swordsmanship, hand to hand, Strength, Agility
Weapon:
The weapon itself is a Katana, (Just imagine a Samurai sword, do I really have to go into an explanation?) that he keeps at his side.
Once released, a shell is grown around him with spikes coming out of it. The shell is nearly indestructible, so it can protect what is happening inside it. While in the shell, his physical appearance begins to change a little.
He grows a set of wings, and also, sharp claws come out of his hands not to mention the growth of his teeth. His body is covered in a goo like substance,(but stays on his body) and is giving off a a dark, glowing, red color. The goo like substance raises his defense. He looks like a true monster.
The goo while it raises defense, can also be used to attack. He can form blades, wherever on his body that he wishes. However, they cannot leave his body, and can only be as long as 1 1/3 yards.
He emerges from the shell, voluntarily or not, and is now ready to kick more butt. When he emerges, the shell is broken and forms into the hilt of the sword. In order for him to return to his original state, he must have the hilt of his sword.
So what basically happens, is he morphs into a monster... yeah..
I hope everyone understood that...
Jlsloane
07-20-2008, 02:03 PM
Might I also add some other areas just for the purpose of defining the world just a little bit more? For example, I name the areas Western Divide and Northern Treeline, meaning the link between the West and East desert for the former, and the link between the desert and forest for the latter. Is this ok?
zabimaru_08
07-20-2008, 02:33 PM
Might I also add some other areas just for the purpose of defining the world just a little bit more? For example, I name the areas Western Divide and Northern Treeline, meaning the link between the West and East desert for the former, and the link between the desert and forest for the latter. Is this ok?
Good idea. I'll use the "Southern Treeline" for the boundary between the northern mountains and the forest.
Blackout
Accepted. JLSloane/Jerren 'Libra' Asmus(your commander) will confirm your rank. Since he's the commander of the Zhan Shi he has final say on his rankings (as long as they are within the guidelines)
Jlsloane
07-20-2008, 02:36 PM
Welcome to the Zhan Shi, Blackout! I absolutely accept you as Lieutenant, having seen your RPs many times before.
kasai
07-21-2008, 03:38 AM
maybe someone could make a vague map of what this place looks like, it could make things a little easier
ra muerute
07-21-2008, 04:29 AM
Ok
Instead of having double swordsmanship I will take take swordsmanship and hand to hand.
razr4543
07-24-2008, 03:41 AM
ooc:I want to have two characters mine and his twin so im gonna do two apps o.k?
Name:Angel Luna(me)
Age:1,016(but looks and acts 16)
Clan:Rouge(Original:Elemental,secondary:velocidad)
Rank:Officer(or leutinet if possible)
Apperrance:Saffire colored eyes,short spikey blue hair(Kakashi style)Is 6 foot and (Like all my charcters:D)Wears long straps with hooks on the ends.has a white outfit on like neji from shippuden with long sleves that go passed his hands.
Biography:He and his brother were sealed away in a tomb underneath the occean durring the first appearence of the rougues for there bad deeds mass murders.They slept for over 1,000 years until they were awakened by the rougue commander and decided to join them because of there power.
Personality:Angel is the more cool headed twin.He planns out his battles and fights using the jyuuken.He is a master at this stle and incooperates his powers in it as he fights.He is also the one who keeps his brother in control.
Specialties:Strength.Hand to hand throwing weapons.Speed,agility.
Clan specialties:Water element & wind element,Cannot access release form but hands become claws when using his velocidad ability.
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Name:Lucian Luna
Age:1,016
:Clan:Rougue(Original:elemenal.Secondary:Zhan shi)
Rank:Officer(or cammander)
Appearence:The same as his brother but eye color is crimson red and his hair is brick red.He has a fanged tooh that shows and always has a bored look on his face like ikkaku whenever he's bored and quite frankly all the time unless he's fighting.he wears the same outfit on except his sleaves are cut off and his is black.
Bio:The same as his brother
Personality:Lucian is the more Hot-headed twin.He's Always getting into immature arguments and gets mad very quickly.He is bored almost all day unless he's fighting and dosn't pay attention that much or listen.He's very blood thirsty in fights,and fights so wildly that his attacks are unreadable.
Specialties:Strength.Swordsmanship,Bow.Strength,Sp eed.
Clan Specialties:Fire elment& Rock element.Cannot access full Zhan shi powers but when he uses it can become a gun or a sword.
Weapon:Large golden diamond shaped arm blades that split in half to reveal a gun underneath for long range.
Like the digimon in this pic at the bottom in front.
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll132/razr4543/digimon_Sea41.jpg
gammaakutabi52
07-24-2008, 04:03 AM
Name: Dajen Kom'sai
Age: 30
Clan: Zhan Shi
Rank: I have thought about it and I would like to put a little interest into the Rp. I would like to request dual commandership with Jlsloane as long as it is okay with him.
Appearance: Dajen is 6 feet tall, muscular, and has long black hair. His eye color differs depending on his mood. When he is calm, it will be black but as he is possesed by the need of blood his eyes will slowly turn crimson red.
Biography: Dajen was always different from the other children. He was the little kid that no one wanted to play with simply because they were all afraid of him. They were all afraid of the look in his eyes. Since he had no one to play with, he instead read books and trained himself in the use of a whip and throwing daggers. Once he became a demon, he was possessed with a need to kill and feast on blood.
Personality: Though usually a calm and cold person, if some one excites him or angers him, he will become more and more psychotic. It is often dangerous to be around him as it is impossible to tell what he will do next. The best way to describe him is insane. When he is in his psychotic mood, he will become unsuprisingly evil. He will also laugh at his opponent in a dark an frightening sort of way.
Specialties:
Swordsmanship and throwing weapons.
Agility and stealth.
Weapon:
Sealed form: The weapon in its sealed form is a chain whip with blades on each side of every chain link. In its released form the chain turns into a long serpent like dragon. The dragon is completely black and has eyes of crimson. He has sharp teeth and blade like ridges running down his back. His name is Nojami and he can only be released when dajen has reached his peak of psychotic bloodlust. The first ability of the released form is Double Faced. When used, Nojami goes through the opponent and carries out the evil half of the opponents soul. The evil side the proceeds to attack its good half. The only way to defeat the evil side is to stab it directly in the heart. The second ability is called Nightmare Land. Once this ability is used, Nojami sinks into the ground and suddelny appears right behind the opponent. Nojami then grabs the opponent and holds them, sending them into a place called Nightmare Land. In this realm, the opponent experiences their worst night mare for what seems like an eternity. Dajen controls the realm and can end the dream at any time. Though it can cause the opponent to go mad, it does no physical damage. The third and final ability is Soul Corruption. It is the most powerful of Dajen's abilities. Once activated, Nojami will go into the opponent. From there, he will corrupt the soul and will cause it to go and attack everything it loves and cherishes until some one is able to kill them. Nojami will then exit the body and return to a whip, as this technique is often tiring. The good side of the opponents soul will often try to fight back and regain control. If the soul does gain back control, Nojami will be expelled from the body and return to Dajen.
Jlsloane
07-24-2008, 09:02 PM
You request dual commandership with me? I'm sorry, but I'll have to refuse that on two reasons:
One, the way the society seems to have worked out in my mind is more of a monarchy than an oligarchy. Dual commandership would seem kinda odd, in my mind.
Two, and most importantly, your character design is completely lacking in any amount of leadership whatsoever. Psychotic? Dark and insane? I don't think that even demons would elect such a commander, least of all the Zhan Shi who are a cultural society (at least, this is how I pictured it). For the moment, we are at peace, but if you were a leader as well, it would change the timeline to war instantaneously.
Sorry to be so blunt, but these are my reasons. I hope they are ok with you. I will, however, be welcome to let you have dual lieutenantship with Blackout. That would fit your character much, much better, I think.
gammaakutabi52
07-24-2008, 09:09 PM
I see your reasoning. Since you are after all a captain, I guess your decision is best. Besides, it really doesn't matter to me. Being a 2nd in command suits me just fine. However, I can give examples of psychotic people as leaders.
Jlsloane
07-24-2008, 09:13 PM
Yes, I'm sorry to have said no... But I think my reasoning was logical, at least for myself. I know that you have a lot of RP skill and will be great in the Zhan Shi ^_^
Yes, you probably can think of examples. But none of those examples would apply to a society remotely like the Zhan Shi, I don't think.
BladeBreaker
07-25-2008, 12:23 AM
I've been thinking about it Razr and I don't think you can have 2 people, both your guys looks good but 2 people is unfair in my opinon. Aslo like for Jlsloane You can't be commander of the rouges, I already am. But there is a 2nd in command postion
razr4543
07-25-2008, 12:26 AM
Well if thats ufair how bout i keep Angel and Lucian goes?Oh and can i be 2nd in command?Please BB?:D
zabimaru_08
07-26-2008, 04:58 PM
sorry i haven't been active lately. I had a course i needed to go on for work (physically and mentally tiring, haven't exercised like that in a long time.)
So i should be more active now.
First of all i want to clear some things up, i don't want dual commandership.
Secondly i don't want every clan ending up with two lieutenants, so i'm going to create a new ranking.
Officer, 1st Class.
Each clan will have very few(if any) first class officers, these officers are in-charge of all the other officers and serve as the commanders right hand man when the lieuteneant is not around. There skill/power will be close to a lieutenants. They will be the ones to delegate jobs to officers and recruits, they will also be the ones that go on the more 'special' missions. Just think of them as elite officers.
Each clan can have 2 people playing as a 1st class officer. I might change this later if the RP gets bigger at any point.
you need over 700 posts to apply for an Officer, 1st Class position.
btw incase you're still confused think of it like this. The lieutenant is the commanders assistant, their advisor. A 1st class officer is more "active", they will be more hands on (with assassinating people or going to war etc).
think that's all.
oh...almost forgot
gammaakutabi52
Accepted. Your commander will give you your rank
Jlsloane
07-26-2008, 05:40 PM
Also, I'd like to post here saying that I really cannot do anything at the moment. As far as story line is concerned, I am waiting for the messengers from the Elemental clan to appear. And they haven't... And I can't really do much until they arrive... So...
zabimaru_08
07-26-2008, 06:31 PM
Also, I'd like to post here saying that I really cannot do anything at the moment. As far as story line is concerned, I am waiting for the messengers from the Elemental clan to appear. And they haven't... And I can't really do much until they arrive... So...
Sorry, but can you remind me who is in control of these characters? You'll have to forgive me my head's still all over the place after that week intensive course i was on. Why were you waiting for a messenger from the elemental clan?
Jlsloane
07-26-2008, 07:17 PM
The two characters are controlled by Vale and Leese. The Elemental commander sent them to attempt to make a truce with the Zhan Shi. They left to cross the desert... And were never heard from again :p
razr4543
07-26-2008, 07:32 PM
Ummm not to be rude but zabi am i accepted and if so BB can i take the rank of luetenit?
zabimaru_08
07-26-2008, 08:32 PM
Ummm not to be rude but zabi am i accepted and if so BB can i take the rank of luetenit?
my bad, yes you're accepted. BB will give you your rank.
Jlsloane, i guess you'll just have to wait unless you can think of a way around it.
BladeBreaker
07-27-2008, 03:57 AM
Sorry for taking so long.
Razor you're 2nd in command
razr4543
07-27-2008, 03:58 AM
Yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeeeeesssssssssssssss!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!:d
darkland8
07-27-2008, 03:12 PM
hey Zabi & BB the other day i came up with a justification for my throwing knives that fly around (by total accident may i add) because my 2nd trait is elemental fire/wind that meen i can use the wind portion of it to maneuver the knives. Is that ok?
zabimaru_08
07-27-2008, 03:22 PM
hey Zabi & BB the other day i came up with a justification for my throwing knives that fly around (by total accident may i add) because my 2nd trait is elemental fire/wind that meen i can use the wind portion of it to maneuver the knives. Is that ok?
No problem. But remember to always take into consideration your rank and the limits of your abilities.
darkland8
07-27-2008, 03:29 PM
ya i know the basically fail... oh ya and do i go up in rank or am i stuck as a recruit till i die 0.o
zabimaru_08
07-27-2008, 03:35 PM
ya i know the basically fail... oh ya and do i go up in rank or am i stuck as a recruit till i die 0.o
as long as you meet the basic criteria
(for example if you want to be a lieutenant you would need at least 500posts)
then your commander can move you up a rank whenever they want too.
darkland8
07-27-2008, 04:01 PM
ahh ok, ya that part confused me a bit =p
Blackout
07-28-2008, 02:36 AM
whoops, wrong discussion thread!
What should I be doing right now btw?
Jlsloane
07-28-2008, 02:49 AM
Really, we're waiting on some people from the Elemental tribe to come to our headquarters. They're taking their time... So we're waiting. I'm just making some filler posts while I wait ^_^
ZenJiro
07-29-2008, 04:56 AM
Name: Sabrunato
Age: He looks 13 but hes actually 95
Clan: Zhan Shi
Rank: If i can i would like to be vice captain but if not put me in officer rank.
Appearance: http://media.photobucket.com/image/demon/droidt/AnimeDemon.jpg?o=58 with black wings of course and one pale horn on his forhead and one half of another horn.
Biography: As Sabrunato grew up he was taught everything about the other clans so when it was time to fight he would be ready for anything they threw at them. but through his training he learned to respect the other clans. and now he is earning his way through the ranks of the Zhan Shi.
Personality: He has allways been respectful. He never really likes to fight but when he must then he will and he has a ton more of paitience than anybody.
Specialties: Hand to Hand Combat-
Swordsmanship-
Sword-
Sealed state- is a very simple sword with a red emerald in its hilt. its 3ft 6 in. it has a hand guard but its in the shape of fire.
Realeased state- http://media.photobucket.com/image/demon%20swords/Chishio_Fuzen/Anime%20Swords/flamesword.jpg?o=7
Riichan
07-31-2008, 01:20 PM
hey guys do you think we could put together a rostor. im a little lost on who is with who, so pretty please, thank you ^^
zabimaru_08
07-31-2008, 01:37 PM
Think i covered everyone. Leese/akane is still unranked i think?
Roster:
Elemental:
Commander - Quincyboy/Lord Vilcente
Lieutenant - Vale/kasa minara(could change soon)
Officer -
Recruit -
Awaiting Rank - Leese/Akane
Velocidad:
Commader - Zabi/Kenryuu
Lieutenant - Kasai/Maverick
Officer -
Recruit -
Zhan Shi:
Commander - JLsloane/Jerren "Libra" Asmus
Lieutenant - Blackout/Joel Dawson & gammaakutabi52/Dajen Kom'sai (?)
Officer(s) - ra muerute/ raiden arai
Recruit(s) - Riichan/Karboon
Rogue:
Commander - BladeBreaker/Vergil Diavolo
Lieutenant -
Officer -
Recruit - Darland/Indu Shikari
Zenjiro, sorry i took a while to get back to you. You need to choose two more specialties from these;
Agility; Makes you more agile so you can jump across tree branches and dodge multiple attacks etc.
Speed; Makes you faster. Keep in mind, even if you choose speed as a ‘specialty’. You still won’t be as fast as the strongest members of the Velocidad demon. But you’ll be able to keep up with the weaker members.
Strength: Makes you stronger. Demons tend to be strong already, much stronger than humans. But this increases your strength.
Stealth: Increases your ability to surprise your opponent and to follow them unnoticed. Making less noise when you move and strategically hiding within the landscape.
You also need to post your swords abilities, is it just the appearance that changes?
kasai
07-31-2008, 08:30 PM
you forgot razr, hes the lieutenant of the rogues
Jlsloane
07-31-2008, 09:05 PM
You also forgot gammaakutabi52. He's my first officer (a.k.a. in the Zhan Shi society, First Shogun).
zabimaru_08
07-31-2008, 09:19 PM
i had him but i put him udner Liuteneant.
ROSTER
Elemental:
Commander - Quincyboy/Lord Vilcente
Lieutenant - Vale/kasa minara(could change soon)
Officer -
Recruit -
Awaiting Rank - Leese/Akane
Velocidad:
Commader - Zabi/Kenryuu
Lieutenant - Kasai/Maverick
Officer -
Recruit -
Zhan Shi:
Commander - JLsloane/Jerren "Libra" Asmus
Lieutenant - Blackout/Joel Dawson
First Class Officer(s) - gammaakutabi52/Dajen Kom'sai
Officer(s) - ra muerute/ raiden arai
Recruit(s) - Riichan/Karboon
Rogue:
Commander - BladeBreaker/Vergil Diavolo
Lieutenant - razr
Officer -
Recruit - Darland/Indu Shikari
Okay, i think that's it. Let me know if there's any corrections to be made.
Kasai, im still waiting on your response to my last post :D
kasai
07-31-2008, 09:40 PM
yeah sorry about that, ive been pretty busy, but its done
zabimaru_08
07-31-2008, 09:46 PM
yeah sorry about that, ive been pretty busy, but its done
lol don't worry about it.
so does anyone have any ideas for the RP? or are you all happy to keep playing it as it is and just waiting to see where it goes.
kasai
07-31-2008, 09:51 PM
I'm actually kinda glad that it hasnt turned into just the 3 clans vs the rogues. Its pretty interesting seeing what clans are gonna end up as allies.
Jlsloane
07-31-2008, 10:56 PM
Hey, who said that was happening? No alliances have been made yet, technically. Who knows what might happen? Maybe there will be a plot twist and the Rogues will gain an ally! Not that I plan on doing that myself but, you know :p
gammaakutabi52
08-01-2008, 01:50 PM
I will be gone till sunday so please don't start anything without me. Later.
ZenJiro
08-01-2008, 10:26 PM
Ok sorry well my other two specialties are Stealth and agility
and my swords only abilites is that
-it can shoot fire from its hilt
-and the dragons eyes will glow a black darkness and it will make the user invisible.
kasai
08-02-2008, 12:43 AM
sorry for kinda modding, but i dont think your sword is allowed to have elemental powers
ZenJiro
08-02-2008, 12:46 AM
oh ok then i could change it i guess but ill change it later
zabimaru_08
08-02-2008, 08:12 AM
your sword can't have any abilities similar to the clan ones.
ZenJiro
08-03-2008, 12:14 AM
fine then can my sword still make me invisible?
if not ill make it so when in realesed state
he has an abillity to make the hilt crawls up my arm and makes it so that i have an arm of steel. then that arm will become a sword itself and the another duplicate of the sword will apear in his other hand.
zabimaru_08
08-03-2008, 08:06 AM
fine then can my sword still make me invisible?
if not ill make it so when in realesed state
he has an abillity to make the hilt crawls up my arm and makes it so that i have an arm of steel. then that arm will become a sword itself and the another duplicate of the sword will apear in his other hand.
both are fine, choose whichever one you want.
tensa-zangetsu
08-05-2008, 05:46 AM
Name: Ikkuto Tsakumoshi
Age: appears in late teens but is actualy around 95
Clan: Zan Shi demon
Rank: officer
appearence: he is about 6 feet 11 inches Red eyes that seem to piece to your soul, silver hair. he wears no shirt and has a long scar, going from shoulder to waist, he wears large black pants that sorta bag but dont actualy like fall below the waist and heavy looking boots that are actualy lightweight.
Biography:as a child he was isolated and he trained agenst hand make wooden dummys, from doing this is social abilitys declined, but his combat skills rose exponentialy because of all his free time
Personality:he is quiet, not shy, he hates company from being ioslated and he dislikes "unruley" behavior
Specialties:
-Hand to hand combat
-swordsmanship
-strength
-speed
Weapon: a scyth whith a blade longer then his body
Released: parts off his body become scyth blades at will, and they can go as far out as the origional blade was (so about 8 feet)
(if it is his ACTUALY body and not an apendage, then it only goes out about 1 foot, but besides that he is all flesh. and it can only go the direction of the body part (like one cant come out of the side of his arm)
zabimaru_08
08-05-2008, 08:41 PM
tensa-zangetsu/Ikkuto Tsakumoshi
Accepted. Your commander will give you your rank
Jlsloane
08-05-2008, 08:54 PM
Name: Ikkuto Tsakumoshi
Age: appears in late teens but is actualy around 95
Clan: Zan Shi demon
Rank: officer
appearence: he is about 6 feet 11 inches Red eyes that seem to piece to your soul, silver hair. he wears no shirt and has a long scar, going from shoulder to waist, he wears large black pants that sorta bag but dont actualy like fall below the waist and heavy looking boots that are actualy lightweight.
Biography:as a child he was isolated and he trained agenst hand make wooden dummys, from doing this is social abilitys declined, but his combat skills rose exponentialy because of all his free time
Personality:he is quiet, not shy, he hates company from being ioslated and he dislikes "unruley" behavior
Specialties:
-Hand to hand combat
-swordsmanship
-strength
-speed
Weapon: a scyth whith a blade longer then his body
Released: parts off his body become scyth blades at will, and they can go as far out as the origional blade was (so about 8 feet)
(if it is his ACTUALY body and not an apendage, then it only goes out about 1 foot, but besides that he is all flesh. and it can only go the direction of the body part (like one cant come out of the side of his arm)
I will give you a rank of... Paravor. This is an elite field officer rank, below Shogun but no less valuable.
tensa-zangetsu
08-06-2008, 06:35 AM
just a question... who is in the zan shi, i only read first 5 and last 2 pages to get a feel of what was going on
----------
plus, am i going to go in myself, or is someone going to set up an introduction? (these are all valubal questions, dont want to barge in and
!@#$ up the plot
zabimaru_08
08-06-2008, 10:15 AM
just a question... who is in the zan shi, i only read first 5 and last 2 pages to get a feel of what was going on
----------
plus, am i going to go in myself, or is someone going to set up an introduction? (these are all valubal questions, dont want to barge in and
!@#$ up the plot
Here's a roster.
Elemental:
Commander - Quincyboy/Lord Vilcente
Lieutenant - Vale/kasa minara(could change soon)
Officer -
Recruit -
Awaiting Rank - Leese/Akane
Velocidad:
Commader - Zabi/Kenryuu
Lieutenant - Kasai/Maverick
Officer -
Recruit -
Zhan Shi:
Commander - JLsloane/Jerren "Libra" Asmus
Lieutenant - Blackout/Joel Dawson
First Class Officer(s) - gammaakutabi52/Dajen Kom'sai
Paravo (Elite field officer) - tensa-zangetsu/Ikkuto Tsakumoshi
Officer(s) - ra muerute/ raiden arai
Recruit(s) - Riichan/Karboon
Rogue:
Commander - BladeBreaker/Vergil Diavolo
Lieutenant - razr
Officer -
Recruit - Darland/Indu Shikari
I think most of the zhan shi are on the move so you'll have to ask your commander (JLsloane) where/how he wants you to start of
Jlsloane
08-06-2008, 09:51 PM
Look at the first page of this thread for background on the RP and information on the Zhan Shi, if you have not already. As far as who is in it, a roster has just been posted.
I suggest posting that you are inside the Zhan Shi HQ, as Velocidad demons may be arriving there imminently. Perhaps you find Joel (the Lieutenant) and ask for orders, or converse while you wait?
razr4543
08-06-2008, 09:53 PM
Theres not that much rougues is there?That sucks:(
ZenJiro
08-07-2008, 03:54 AM
well seeing that there aren't many rouges i would like to be a rouge instead if thats ok
Name: Sabrunato
Age: He looks 16 but hes actually 95
Clan: Rouge
Rank: As high as i can get
Appearance: http://media.photobucket.com/image/angel%20of%20darkness/Animegirl501/Angel%20Sanctuary/darkness.jpg?o=22
Biography: As Sabrunato grew up he was taught everything about the other clans so when it was time to fight he would be ready for anything they threw at them. but through his training he learned to respect the other clans. But now as the war broke out he found the trueful side is with the rouges.
Personality: He has allways been respectful. He never really likes to fight but when he must then he will and he has a ton more of paitience than anybody.
Specialties:
Swordsmanship (my wepon http://media.photobucket.com/image/demon%20swords/Chishio_Fuzen/Anime%20Swords/flamesword.jpg?o=7)
Throwing wepons
Agility
Stealth
Sabrunato was originally from the Zhan Shi clan and obtained an ability from the clan.
Primary ability: the dragons eyes on his sword will glow a black darkness and it will make the user invisible.
Secondary ability: The hilt of the sword crawls up my arm and makes it so that i have an arm of steel. then that arm will become a sword itself and the another duplicate of the sword will apear in his other hand.
bleach anime fan 00000000
08-07-2008, 04:29 AM
I'll join this.
Name: Destroma
Age: Looks to be 50 but is actually 500
Clan: elemental
Rank: Highest I can be.
Appearance: Very tall, has white hair. His skin is a dark grayish color. Destroma has gray eyes, and wears a dark kimono.
Biography: He has lived his entire life despising the other clans. He can make exeptions in a time of need. When he was young, everyone he knew were murdered during a raid. Since then, he has sought revenge on the people who raided his area.
Personality: Very calm and collected, he hardly ever let's his temper get the better of him. He hardly smiles or laughs anymore.
Specialties: His specialties are hand to hand combat and swordsmanship. He excells in strength and agility.
Elements: His elements are earth and fire.
Earth full power attk: His full power attack for earth is a big box of earth surrounds the opponent and spikes shoot at him from the inside.
Earth full power defence: His full power defence is a 10 ft thick ball of earth covers him.
Fire full power attk: His full power attack is his blade starts on fire and it can shoot gigantic fire balls.
Fire full power defence: His full power defence is an extremly hot wall of flame appears where ever he wants it too.
Special attk: His special attack is a ball of earth fill with extremly hot flames get shot at the opponent, exploding and sending flame and rocks everywhere.
Not many elementals, are there?
tensa-zangetsu
08-07-2008, 04:32 AM
Wtf A Guy Wearing A Kimono???? Cross Dresser! CROSS DRESSER
bleach anime fan 00000000
08-07-2008, 04:37 AM
Hey, I didn't know what it was called that the guys wear. You know the similar thing? I'd happily change it if I knew what they were called.
tensa-zangetsu
08-07-2008, 04:37 AM
if u dont belive me, google kimono, and just to let you know, i made the same mistake once >.<
vale of the gate
08-07-2008, 04:37 AM
uh tensa kimonos are unisex garments just thought
id clear that up,there is a difference in mens and womens but they go by the same
name
razr4543
08-07-2008, 05:03 AM
Anyway hey zen whats your second clan power,i mean whats the other clan that you obtained a power from?
zabimaru_08
08-07-2008, 05:38 AM
i'll review the app when i get back from work
TO CLARIFY
maverick is in the forest with two officers.(npcs)
3 other officers are in the desert(npcs)
Forest npcs will be red font desert npcs will be green.
i noticed some people were getting confused,
sorry i need to rush to work.
tensa-zangetsu
08-07-2008, 05:38 AM
:O when i googled kimono only females wore them (LATIN CLASS: uni=1 EX: unicorn (1 horn) unicycle (1 wheel) unisex (1 SEX))
(PS who has mesenger? i would like to add dem)
zabimaru_08
08-07-2008, 01:32 PM
kimonos are unisex,
It's what the shinigami from bleach wear.
Zenjiro - since you are joining the rogues you are allowed two abilities. You were originally from the Zhan Shi which means you have your weapon but you may also control one of the main elements (fire,earth,air,water) or have the speed of the velocidad. Remember that your rank determines your strength and the ability you choose from the other clan will only be half as strong as it normally is.
let me know about this and i'll review your application^
BleachAnimeFan
Accepted. Your commander will give you your rank.
tensa-zangetsu
08-07-2008, 09:05 PM
(these are in ord from greatest conductor to worst) this is for gamma. silver, copper, gold, brass, aluminum, iron, and steel are the conductive metals (the common conductive) this is just a heads up, so to determin the hardness (a rare one is platinum though, its 84% less conductive then copper) while titanium is 99%, i just want to confirm WHAT metal it is and how hard to actualy have to hit it to smash it OR how much electricity you have to pump to electricute you
gammaakutabi52
08-07-2008, 09:41 PM
It is black steel, a made up metal. The metal has been heat treated, so it is harder than titanium. It is equal to platinum in conductability. There is no breaking it by physical means.
It is kind of scary that you want to know how to break it. Do we have a traitor in our group?:D
zabimaru_08
08-07-2008, 09:49 PM
lol^
also i wouldn't say there is no breaking it by physical means. Surely a high ranked Zhan Shi would be able to break it with their released weapon, or the Velocidad commander(me) would be able to break it in his released form? Even if it means breaking one of their own bones in the process lol
Although i can accept an officer or someone equal to yourself not being able to break it physically.
gammaakutabi52
08-07-2008, 09:54 PM
Any commander can break it in released form. An officer can roll a boulder off a cliff and break it that way, though it will kill me in the proccess. A leiuteneant can dent it in released form.
zabimaru_08
08-07-2008, 09:55 PM
An officer can roll a boulder off a cliff and break it that way, though it will kill me in the proccess.
LOL....i'll have to remember that next time one of my officers fights you lol
tensa-zangetsu
08-08-2008, 07:09 AM
that was a clarification for others >.> im no traitor, cause i mean, its unfair to not know its flaws
gammaakutabi52
08-08-2008, 04:10 PM
I have been thinking. Since there are very few rogues and alot of the other three clans, we may come to a problem. If the three true clans do join forces to defeat the rogues, there will not be enough rogues for everyone to be able to fight. Therefore I believe that we must select 3 to 4 players who have extensive skill in RPing to create another character who is a rogue. This character will be represented by a different colored font. The players who are selected have to create a new character with a name, abilities, former clan, and new clan ability.
This is just an idea. Tell me what you think.
zabimaru_08
08-08-2008, 04:20 PM
First of all i'd like to say i have no intention on joining forces with the elemental clan (mainly for the reason you mentioned) but if the zhan shi joins the elemental and we join the zhan shi...things will become awkward.
You have an interesting idea. But i'm worried that it could become very confusing. I did at one point think about allowing everyone to have two characters but again, it could become really confusing and some people might end up concentrating on one of their characters more than the other not to mention the fact that not everybody is active enough to control one character never mind two.
however this would help even out the clans. Considering the Zhan Shi(in comparison to the other clans) is like a full sized army. My clan(the velocidad) actually have the least members. The elemental and Rogue are almost equal.
I'll have to think about this...everyone else let me know what you think as well.
p.s here's a roster incase anyone has forgotten.
Elemental:
Commander - Quincyboy/Lord Vilcente
Lieutenant - Vale/kasa minara(could change soon)
Officer -
Recruit -
Awaiting Rank - Leese/Akane, bleachanimefan/destroma
Velocidad:
Commader - Zabi/Kenryuu
Lieutenant - Kasai/Maverick
Officer -
Recruit -
Zhan Shi:
Commander - JLsloane/Jerren "Libra" Asmus
Lieutenant - Blackout/Joel Dawson
First Class Officer(s) - gammaakutabi52/Dajen Kom'sai
Paravo (Elite field officer) - tensa-zangetsu/Ikkuto Tsakumoshi
Officer(s) - ra muerute/ raiden arai
Recruit(s) - Riichan/Karboon
Rogue:
Commander - BladeBreaker/Vergil Diavolo
Lieutenant - razr
Officer -
Recruit - Darland/Indu Shikari
gammaakutabi52
08-08-2008, 04:29 PM
The person who I thought would be best to do two characters would be Jsloane.
What we need right now is a way to escalate the tension between the three clans. After reading all of the apps, my character seems to be the only one with the personality to do something that would turn the three clans against each other, but I don't want to do that.
zabimaru_08
08-08-2008, 05:03 PM
i'll wait and see what everyone else thinks.
i see no problems with clans calling a 'truce'. but only to a certain extent.
Jlsloane
08-08-2008, 11:50 PM
Yeah, I don't really want a clan-wide alliance either... Ruins the point, kinda. Truces are fine with me, though, but truces really only exist to be broken, in the end. By who, though, that's the question :p
Also, I don't mind playing a second character, if need be. I have some years of RP experience under my belt, and I have played two characters before (albeit, I'll admit, some time ago). I am also fine with having a Velocidad demon to help out the sole two in that clan, if it is possible. I already have a good idea of the character... That is, if this motion passes through Zabi here ^_^
On a side note, I will be leaving tonight to go to my country house. I will be gone for most of the weekend, but will be back sunday afternoon/evening. So, if you notice a long absence... Well, now you know why ^^
tensa-zangetsu
08-09-2008, 02:18 AM
the one thing that migh suck alot when having 2 on opposite sides, the fact that you could fight urself lol
gammaakutabi52
08-09-2008, 04:34 AM
I am pretty sure that no one would ever even try to fight themselves. The only reason I proposed this idea was so that if it came down to the three clans joining forces, at least most of the people would have some one to fight.
Now then, here is a newly designed plot advancment. The three true clans will have their truce. Then, rogues will murder an officer from each clan and make it appear as if it was the work of another clan. Ex: A rogue with Zhan Shi abilities would murder an elemental so it would look like that the Zhan Shi did it while another rogue with elemental abilities murdered a Velocidad to make it look like the Elemental clan did it.
Quincyboy
08-09-2008, 06:14 AM
Okay Valinya ranking is as follows.
Left Hand-Bleach Anime Fan 00000000
Right Hand- Open
High Ordinators-Open
Ordinators-Leese
Vale
Promotion may occur at the end of the mission
Baf you are in the elemental half of the western divides crossing point fortress. Please refer to my earlier posts in the RP to get a "feel" for the Valinya(elementals)
vale of the gate
08-09-2008, 06:21 AM
ok quick question qb what is the power level
for ordinators so me and leese know how to use
our powers
Quincyboy
08-09-2008, 06:31 AM
Okay the ordinators are the elite force of the elementals as we are a isolationist and peaceful people we do not have an army just you guys. You are experts of you elements when it comes to combat uses.
Therefore you have the power of a medium level demon. You can conjure multiple fireballs, ice spikes, boulders etc but can only perform area affecting abilities at a small scale for a limited time. You mainly focus on small precise uses of the elements for combat rather than mass destruction.
Any other questions?
vale of the gate
08-09-2008, 06:37 AM
Ah that makes sense no no more questions,just
wanted to make sure i was using my powers correctly
zabimaru_08
08-09-2008, 09:28 PM
Okay, JLsloane will have two characters (his second being a member of the velocidad).
if this works out i might allow some others to have two characters (to try and even things out) but i will only allow active and reliable people to do this...and anyway it's not for certain, just a thought.
Yeah, I don't really want a clan-wide alliance either... Ruins the point, kinda. Truces are fine with me, though, but truces really only exist to be broken, in the end. By who, though, that's the question :p
I agree^
P.S have fun on your weekend break.
bleach anime fan 00000000
08-10-2008, 12:54 AM
Okay Valinya ranking is as follows.
Left Hand-Bleach Anime Fan 00000000
Right Hand- Open
High Ordinators-Open
Ordinators-Leese
Vale
Promotion may occur at the end of the mission
Baf you are in the elemental half of the western divides crossing point fortress. Please refer to my earlier posts in the RP to get a "feel" for the Valinya(elementals)
Okay, I just have one question. How is the power of the left hand? I want to know before I start posting in the RP, so I don't mess it up at all.
zabimaru_08
08-10-2008, 03:00 PM
Commanders
From now on each commander is in charge of their 'roster' and keeping it up-to-date. There is two reasons for this.
1. Makes it easier for me.
2. It keeps the commanders active, having to reguarly check on any new members and alter individual rankings etc.
So i need all of the commanders to post there roster a.s.a.p
if you are using your own rankings(most of you are) then please have the equivelant ranking in brackets. For example the elementals left hand and right hand are equal to 'Lieutenant.' (i think).
This helps to keep everyone right.
BladeBreaker
08-10-2008, 04:48 PM
Rouge Roster
-Commander:Vergil Diavolo/Blade Breaker
-Lieutenant:Angel/Razr
-Officer:
-Recruit:Indu/Darkland
ZenJiro
08-10-2008, 06:09 PM
wait was my app not acceptable or something?
what do i have to do?
zabimaru_08
08-10-2008, 06:52 PM
wait was my app not acceptable or something?
what do i have to do?
your application is fine apart from one thing, which is explained in this post *click me* (http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showpost.php?p=945874&postcount=93)
blade, thanks for the roster.
Jlsloane
08-11-2008, 12:22 AM
Commander: Jerren "Libra" Asmus (JLSloane)
Lieutenant: Joel Dawson (Blackout)
First Shogun (i.e. First Officer): Dajen Kom'Sai (gammaakutabi52)
Paravor (Elite Officer): Ikkuto Tsakumoshi (tensa-zangetsu)
Quaestor (Officer): Raiden Arai (ra muerute) and Karboon (Riichan)
The last two have not posted in the RP for some time... I'm not sure whether to remove them or not...
I will post my second character application form later tonight, I think.
ZenJiro
08-11-2008, 01:03 AM
kimonos are unisex,
It's what the shinigami from bleach wear.
Zenjiro - since you are joining the rogues you are allowed two abilities. You were originally from the Zhan Shi which means you have your weapon but you may also control one of the main elements (fire,earth,air,water) or have the speed of the velocidad. Remember that your rank determines your strength and the ability you choose from the other clan will only be half as strong as it normally is.
let me know about this and i'll review your application^
BleachAnimeFan
Accepted. Your commander will give you your rank.
ok? then i want the speed of the velocidad please and thank you
Jlsloane
08-11-2008, 02:53 AM
And now for my secondary character application:
Name: Nesor Lamarath
Age: 77
Clan: Velocidad
Rank: First Officer
Appearance: He looks very young, for in demon years, he is only in his young adulthood. Oddly enough, despite his apparent youth, his hair is completely white. It is cut short and often combed to the side. His eyes are black, clashing oddly with his hair. He wears all black clothes to further clash with the hair. A basic black mesh shirt serves to cover his torso, with a pair of light baggy pants covering his lower half. When on ceremony, he drapes a black cape over this outfit as well.
As for his weapon, he wields two short swords, each of which have the capacity of extending into short spears with the push of a button (and vise versa).
Biography: Although young, Nesor showed from a young age to be a true prodigy. Easily outdoing his fellow trainees in both tactics and combat, he was moved up higher and higher, outfighting each level he moved up to. He has fought many demons in his short years and never lost but once, after which he swore never to lose again. He has earned much respect in the eyes of his peers for having such strength and skill at an age so young. He has only further to go as his years draw on.
Personality: Nesor knows his skill all too well. While not such a braggart as others, he is very prideful and can sometimes boast a bit too much. When this leads to trouble, he usually talks his way back out of it, his tongue being quite the silver one. While not necessarily friendly, he is not necessarily mean either. He has a neutral stance on nearly everything, from people to battle itself. At times, it seems as though he doesn't care, entering into a hormonal state of apathy which does nothing but anger those around him.
Specialties:
-Swordsmanship
-Hand-to-hand
-Agility
-Speed
Released Form:
http://bestgamewallpapers.com/files/diablo-2-lord-of-destruction/werewolf.jpg
Very much like this, except that wherever you see those large tufts of fur, it is actually a bone ridge, like a small, unbendable wing. One of these appears on either elbow, shoulder, side of abdomen, knee and ankle. These help generate lift as Nesor moves fast, serving to lift him off the ground granted he moves fast enough. This allows for sleek glides along and slightly above the ground. He cannot glide higher than he can jump, however. But if he jumps from a tree, this raises his gliding height, etc.
Also, I would like to change the the rank of Lieutenant to Archon, for the Zhan Shi, to make it more unique among other unique names ^_^
zabimaru_08
08-11-2008, 08:25 AM
Also, I would like to change the the rank of Lieutenant to Archon, for the Zhan Shi, to make it more unique among other unique names ^_^
That's fine by me^
your application is also accepted(no surprises there).
razr4543
08-11-2008, 02:59 PM
O.k people as you've already read i sort of mentioned that angel was originally the first elemental commander,but was betrayed and was sealed away which ya know explains his age and appearence.First i wanted to see if this was o.k with you guys.Then i wanted to discuss somthing else as well.
Oh and yes zabi knows of this but i have to discuss it with the rest of you guys to uncomplicate things in the future if you all accept what i have to say.
Jlsloane
08-12-2008, 01:00 AM
O.k people as you've already read i sort of mentioned that angel was originally the first elemental commander,but was betrayed and was sealed away which ya know explains his age and appearence.First i wanted to see if this was o.k with you guys.Then i wanted to discuss somthing else as well.
Oh and yes zabi knows of this but i have to discuss it with the rest of you guys to uncomplicate things in the future if you all accept what i have to say.
I don't really have a quarrel with it... Though by being the previous elemental commander, are you suggesting that you have commander strength skills, though you are a Lieutenant? Because I do not think that is ok...
razr4543
08-12-2008, 01:22 AM
Well not really i was gonna say somthing like the time sealed up drained my power besides heres the rest of the bio that i want to dicuss.Alright it would go into the whole thing of angel being the first commander.Alright seeing how hes a master of jyuuken and how the 8 trigrams is actually a graph to show the harmeny of the elements.I was wondring if it would be o.k if during my rule i created 8 orbs for each element water, wind, fire, earth, wood,metal,light and darkness.These orbs would increase an elementals control over their elements as well as give them the power to control the element of the orb.I had control of 4 of these orbs water,wind,light and darkness.The others went to my most powerful officers vilcente/Quincy one of them.I was on the verge of bringing all the other clans to our knees,But vilcente thought that this was bad and that the three clans should work in harmeny.We faught over this and end result i was sealed away and 6 of the orbs were sealed away within the three clans.wind and earth with the velocidads,water and wood the elementals and fire and metal the zhan shi and only the commanders and leuitenants were in possesion of them.The last two light and darkness were sealed with me because those two orbs i had fused with myself.Now this is is why i keep mentioning the elemtals treasure and why its issential if we want to take over...........but then i realized that if i continued without seeing if this story would be accpted
that it would make the whole rp confusing and make it seem as if i were controlling it,so i wanted to discuss this with the rest of you...............So what do you guys think???
Jlsloane
08-12-2008, 01:26 AM
Well not really i was gonna say somthing like the time sealed up drained my power besides heres the rest of the bio that i want to dicuss.Alright it would go into the whole thing of angel being the first commander.Alright seeing how hes a master of jyuuken and how the 8 trigrams is actually a graph to show the harmeny of the elements.I was wondring if it would be o.k if during my rule i created 8 orbs for each element water, wind, fire, earth, wood,metal,light and darkness.These orbs would increase an elementals control over their elements as well as give them the power to control the element of the orb.I had control of 4 of these orbs water,wind,light and darkness.The others went to my most powerful officers vilcente/Quincy one of them.I was on the verge of bringing all the other clans to our knees,But vilcente thought that this was bad and that the three clans should work in harmeny.We faught over this and end result i was sealed away and 6 of the orbs were sealed away within the three clans.wind and earth with the velocidads,water and wood the elementals and fire and metal the zhan shi and only the commanders and leuitenants were in possesion of them.The last two light and darkness were sealed with me because those two orbs i had fused with myself.Now this is is why i keep mentioning the elemtals treasure and why its issential if we want to take over...........but then i realized that if i continued without seeing if this story would be accpted
that it would make the whole rp confusing and make it seem as if i were controlling it,so i wanted to discuss this with the rest of you...............So what do you guys think???
Well, it sounds like you are trying to introduce a totally separate story line into this RP... I do not know if I agree with it or not. It serves only to complicate things, as far as I can see. I like the way it is going currently. I don't think there's a need to take it further unless we really run low on plot line.
razr4543
08-12-2008, 01:28 AM
ALright i guess your right........we'll continue with the original plot:D
Blackout
08-12-2008, 01:32 AM
since when was wood, metal, light, and darkness elements???
it would just be wind, earth, water, and fire
and yeah, it does sound like your trying to bring in a whole new storyline. Maybe later on in the RP, but not right now.
Jlsloane
08-12-2008, 01:32 AM
It's a cool idea though. It's like a second season story line, you know what I mean? This is the first season... Once there's a season climax, followed by a lull, perhaps we can try this one out to continue things? That's generally how such things work, I think...
What I mean is, keep the idea in mind. Maybe build on it a bit, just in case we do indeed decide to use it. Of course, we haven't yet heard Zabi's views on this... Let's wait for his opinions before making any real decisions. This is his RP after all, eh?
razr4543
08-12-2008, 01:39 AM
Yeah and wood,metal,light and darkness have always been elements man what are you talkin bout?
Blackout
08-12-2008, 01:46 AM
not really lol
Whatever though, this isn't a thread for me to debate with you about nature.
Lightning would be an element, you forgot that
So back on RP discussions
razr4543
08-12-2008, 01:49 AM
Your right not the place but yeah we'll see about the whole thing when the others start to give there oppinion
kasai
08-12-2008, 03:38 AM
can velocidad in werewolf form still use weapons?
Jlsloane
08-12-2008, 03:47 AM
can velocidad in werewolf form still use weapons?
I would assume so. Their body simply switches to a Lycan form. They still have fingers which can hold things... Of course, they also gain long deadly claws, so weapons aren't necessarily the most practical tool for fighting in such a form.
ZenJiro
08-13-2008, 11:02 PM
im sorry for this again but im still a bit confused. am i in the RP now or... what
*scratches his head*
razr4543
08-14-2008, 12:07 AM
yeah dude just jump in whenever i guess...............your a rougue right?
zetsuei-kanta
08-17-2008, 10:13 PM
Name: kayuki mashikage
Age:looks like a infent child but is the age of 114 Clan: Zhan shi demon
Rank: recruit
Appearance: has short white spiky hair with a little light blue and a shade of black around the back tips of the ends.
Biography: lived in darkness his whole life waiting for the time to arise again after his defeat against his father hoping he could recover his past as it was takin from him long ago (lol typical punk ). he wishes to abtain powers strong then his hoping he could become a demon prince Personality: happy go lucky, cocky when it comes to fighting, and very stubborn.
Specialties:
-hand to hand combat
-martial arts mastery
-power
-agility
sealed form: has a katar with a brightly colored large shuriken in the center
has a red thin clothe at the end of it. the katar it self is black with sharp lines and red with strafes.
released state: the katar doubles itself attaching to its users back turning into large katar wings the star strinks onto the chest of the user empowing his speed . the users body covers in darkness his eyes glowing red and black his demon arm changes into a wolf like claw and changes his clothes into a a white like suit (like a arrancar lol). Power increases largly although speed slows.
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plz reply soon i bored with fighters of kann i need somethin new so this is my chose good rp lol
Jlsloane
08-18-2008, 12:53 AM
Name: kayuki mashikage
Age:looks like a infent child but is the age of 114 Clan: Zhan shi demon
Rank: recruit
Appearance: has short white spiky hair with a little light blue and a shade of black around the back tips of the ends.
Biography: lived in darkness his whole life waiting for the time to arise again after his defeat against his father hoping he could recover his past as it was takin from him long ago (lol typical punk ). he wishes to abtain powers strong then his hoping he could become a demon prince Personality: happy go lucky, cocky when it comes to fighting, and very stubborn.
Specialties:
-hand to hand combat
-martial arts mastery
-power
-agility
sealed form: has a katar with a brightly colored large shuriken in the center
has a red thin clothe at the end of it. the katar it self is black with sharp lines and red with strafes.
released state: the katar doubles itself attaching to its users back turning into large katar wings the star strinks onto the chest of the user empowing his speed . the users body covers in darkness his eyes glowing red and black his demon arm changes into a wolf like claw and changes his clothes into a a white like suit (like a arrancar lol). Power increases largly although speed slows.
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plz reply soon i bored with fighters of kann i need somethin new so this is my chose good rp lol
Well, it looks ok to me except for one thing. I do not believe that Zhan Shi weapons are allowed to emulate other clans' special abilities. Speed is a Velocidad-only ability, so I think you must change your weapon to eliminate the speed boost. An agility boost can be allowed in its stead, if you would prefer that.
Also, try not to double post... You double posted within 10 minutes of your first post -__- No really smiled upon...
tensa-zangetsu
08-18-2008, 02:07 PM
Jlsloane re-read the last 6 words in his released state, "power increases largely but speed slows" so to jlsolane u usualy dont make mistakes like that, lol and zetsuei-kanta, u need to have more description about ur guy, like i didnt know he had a demon arm until the release said anything, so please fix that and i think jlsolane was tiard or something he doesnt make those kind of simple mistakes >.> seriously
(APPEARENCE ISNT JUST UR HAIR)
Jlsloane
08-18-2008, 11:58 PM
Name: kayuki mashikage
Age:looks like a infent child but is the age of 114 Clan: Zhan shi demon
Rank: recruit
Appearance: has short white spiky hair with a little light blue and a shade of black around the back tips of the ends.
Biography: lived in darkness his whole life waiting for the time to arise again after his defeat against his father hoping he could recover his past as it was takin from him long ago (lol typical punk ). he wishes to abtain powers strong then his hoping he could become a demon prince Personality: happy go lucky, cocky when it comes to fighting, and very stubborn.
Specialties:
-hand to hand combat
-martial arts mastery
-power
-agility
sealed form: has a katar with a brightly colored large shuriken in the center
has a red thin clothe at the end of it. the katar it self is black with sharp lines and red with strafes.
released state: the katar doubles itself attaching to its users back turning into large katar wings the star strinks onto the chest of the user empowing his speed . the users body covers in darkness his eyes glowing red and black his demon arm changes into a wolf like claw and changes his clothes into a a white like suit (like a arrancar lol). Power increases largly although speed slows.
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plz reply soon i bored with fighters of kann i need somethin new so this is my chose good rp lol
Tensa-Zengetsu, please notice the part in bold. This is what I was referring to, not the decrease. So, as I usually don't make mistakes like that, I didn't this time either ^_^
Also, looking over your post again, your first and second forms are not clearly separated at all. They are in the same paragraph and no note is made to say they are distinctly different.
tensa-zangetsu
08-19-2008, 06:53 AM
well, would he contridict himself to where he gains no speed at all... >.< confusion oh wait... empoer doesnt mean to increase
–verb (used with object) 1. to give power or authority to; authorize, esp. by legal or official means: I empowered my agent to make the deal for me. The local ordinance empowers the board of health to close unsanitary restaurants.
2. to enable or permit: Wealth empowered him to live a comfortable life.
that was from dictionary.com... empower doesnt mean to power up anything but, yes, soem people DO use it out of context, but truely, he has lower speed then before
BladeBreaker
08-19-2008, 10:21 AM
Read the definition more carefully dude.
1. to give power or authority to; authorize, esp. by legal or official means
It say to give power to, esp. simply means especially in that case, meaning only that it is a word used to describe giving power or authority to by legal or official means
bleach anime fan 00000000
08-19-2008, 07:49 PM
Sorry I haven't hopped in yet, but I am still waiting to see what my power level will be. Like I said, I don't want to make any mistakes during a fight.
zabimaru_08
08-21-2008, 10:42 PM
you're strength and abilities are equivalent to the rank of "Lieutenant"
btw everyone I'm thinking about dropping one or two people since they're incredibly inactive.
razr4543
08-21-2008, 10:44 PM
Hmmmmmmmm...............Zabi can we arrange sonthing so me and maverick can fight?Im bored.........:(
zabimaru_08
08-21-2008, 10:47 PM
myself and maverick are going to meet with the zhan shi. you'll have to find someone else.
I feel like the story needs to be moved along but no one knows what direction to take it in.
I would like it if people would start posting their opinions on where we are right now in the story and if they think we need to add something in to move it along(and if so, what you would like to see being added in)
i've noticed some RP's dying a very slow death, i don't want that to happen to this one.
vale of the gate
08-21-2008, 10:51 PM
well the elementals and zhan shi still have that pact to make so im
going to try to get that part going again and leese isnt going to
around so her character can be replaced
Jlsloane
08-22-2008, 01:38 AM
You would like locations? Jerren is in the Western Desert, moving steadily towards Vilcente, to speak and possibly make a truce. Nesor is in the Velocidad HQ with Maverick and Kenryuu.
Story directions? I think someone else had a great idea. The rogues assassinate members from each tribe, making it seem like another of the tribes did it. This would cause a three sided war, with the Rogues causing chaos everywhere. This may be difficult to do, but I think it's a good idea, as well as being big enough to give everyone a good fight every once and a while.
razr4543
08-22-2008, 12:32 PM
But the with the number of rougues i find that hard to do especially since we havn't seen indu for a while and zen has yet to jump in..............
zabimaru_08
08-22-2008, 01:01 PM
But the with the number of rougues i find that hard to do especially since we havn't seen indu for a while and zen has yet to jump in..............
it would only take one rogue to do it.
For example a rogue who gained control of the elements could kill a velocidad demon(using the elements) then as the velocidad blame the elemental that same rogue could kill an elemental demon (using a knife or something, as long as it isn't using a zhan shi weapon or the elements) and it would look like a velocidad retaliation.
that's just an example^ i'm not saying that's what we'll do.
However i do like this idea.
as for the inactive members, i'm giving them until monday to post in here to prove they are still active. If they don't post in here by monday they will be dropped. I'll try and send a pm if possible.
ichigo_1993
08-22-2008, 03:30 PM
Hey if you are going to cut people on Monday if they dont show up would you mind posting an updated members list so I can chose which clan to join. Please and thank you
~ Cloud
BladeBreaker
08-22-2008, 07:46 PM
Sorry for being in active, my physics class is playing hell on my brain, I'm more tired and can't think straight often, I barely manage to be able to post here and there.
zabimaru_08
08-22-2008, 08:34 PM
Sorry for being in active, my physics class is playing hell on my brain, I'm more tired and can't think straight often, I barely manage to be able to post here and there.
don't worry about it i know you're active on BA anyway.
ichigo there's a roster about a page(maybe two pages) back.
razr4543
08-22-2008, 08:35 PM
Yeah zabi-san sorry for being inactive............school just started and i gotta be off at a certain time until after school the nex day..........i'll try and be more active.........sorrry:(
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it would only take one rogue to do it.
For example a rogue who gained control of the elements could kill a velocidad demon(using the elements) then as the velocidad blame the elemental that same rogue could kill an elemental demon (using a knife or something, as long as it isn't using a zhan shi weapon or the elements) and it would look like a velocidad retaliation.
that's just an example^ i'm not saying that's what we'll do.
However i do like this idea.
as for the inactive members, i'm giving them until monday to post in here to prove they are still active. If they don't post in here by monday they will be dropped. I'll try and send a pm if possible.
Oh yeah and sre you hinting that i do this???
bleach anime fan 00000000
08-22-2008, 09:34 PM
you're strength and abilities are equivalent to the rank of "Lieutenant"
btw everyone I'm thinking about dropping one or two people since they're incredibly inactive.
All right. That's all I wanted to know. That's the main reason I was inactive. Should I start in the elemental's city then?
Jlsloane
08-22-2008, 09:36 PM
Blah, I'm obviously here. When am I not here? I swear, this BA thing is really an addiction :p Though probably not as much for me as some people... I'm away for much of the day at work and some such.
The person we really need right now is Quincyboy to play Vilcente... Can't really make a truce without the elemental leader, eh?
Also, Zabi and whoever is actively involved in planning story line for the RP, do you think we should exchange MSN addresses or something? It may make it significantly easier to plan...
razr4543
08-22-2008, 09:37 PM
Qb is off because his enternet connections down so he has to get on over friends houses,sucks i know................
Blackout
08-22-2008, 11:53 PM
Sorry I've been inactive in the RP. There just isn't really much action headed my way anytime soon, so its just a real pain to post about how bored I am XD
ichigo_1993
08-23-2008, 03:03 AM
Name: Tensu Kiople
Age: 128 athough he looks in his early teens.
Clan: Rogue
Rank: Officer
Appearance: http://www.testriffic.com/resultfiles/14892Fallen_Angel_deviantID_by_so_close.jpg
not my picture
Biography: He left the Zhan Shi clan when he was just 28 years old because his brother , who was in the element clan, was killed by a Zhan Shi demon. In the last century he has trained in his brothers art as well as his own.
Personality: Tensu is a calm and collective person. When he fights he perfers hit and run tactics. Around his friends Tensu is outgoing and he follows orders to the tee. Tensu also has been hunting down his brothers murder.
Specialties:
- Hand to hand combat
- Swordsmanship
- Steath
- Agility
Weapon(Blood):
http://www.testriffic.com/resultfiles/14892Fallen_Angel_deviantID_by_so_close.jpg
Tensu's weapon has the soul of his older brother tied to it by black magic. When it is realesed Tensu's brother fights side by side with Tensu. Tensu also uses it to talk to his brother and to get him closer to finding and killing his brother's murderer.
Element(Secondary): Fire. Tensu didnt try learning two elements instead he focused on using one.
tensa-zangetsu
08-24-2008, 01:16 AM
(yay for non inactive-ness... er... YAY FOR ACTIVENESS!)
i think the messenger idea would be nice for those who have it
.... Tensu?... rly close to tensa.... :( (i dont like identity theft lol)
BladeBreaker
08-24-2008, 04:52 AM
Ichigo_1993, I've reviewd you app, it seems good, you're in at the rank of officer
gammaakutabi52
08-24-2008, 04:11 PM
i am posting my activness. sorry for not being on. I have been sick.
bleach anime fan 00000000
08-25-2008, 11:19 PM
I'm spending less and less time on the computer lately, so it'd be ok if you dropped me in the RP. I haven't nessecarily posted in it yet, so that's good if you dropped me. I've just been skating more lately. So I may not be on the computer as much in the future.
zabimaru_08
08-26-2008, 08:23 AM
the following people are being dropped from the RP due to failure to post in here (or to myself via pm) to prove they are active. Commanders please change your rankings/roster accordingly then re-post it.
Ra muerute
Riichan
Darkland
Zenjiro
You can all re-join at anytime but you will be placed in the lowest ranking possible. This is incase you dissapear again, if you're a low-ranked character then your inactivity shouldn't effect the story or other characters as much so it's easier to drop you. If you re-apply and prove you will be active(in the low rank) then eventually you might get your old rank back.
if i've forgotten anyone let me know ^
bleach anime fan 00000000 I realise you had trouble getting started since you didn't know the power level of your rank and where everyone was so you can continue playing if you wish but if you're going to be as inactive as you imply it might be best that you leave, it's your choice, only you know how active you will be.
tensa-zangetsu
08-26-2008, 02:41 PM
new roster plz., i forggot my allys >.<
Jlsloane
08-27-2008, 05:16 PM
Here is a roster, as requested:
Commander: Jerren "Libra" Asmus (JLSloane)
Archon: Joel Dawson (Blackout)
First Shogun: Dajen Kom'Sai (gammaakutabi52)
Paravor (Elite Field Officer): Ikkuto Tsakumochi (tensa-zangetsu)
BladeBreaker
08-27-2008, 09:17 PM
Rouge Roster
-Commander:Vergil Diavolo/Blade Breaker
-Lieutenant:Angel/Razr
-Officer:Tensu Kiople/ichigo_1993
-Recruit:
bleach anime fan 00000000
08-27-2008, 10:17 PM
Well, I may not leave just yet. Once school starts (september 2nd) I will be more active since I have five hour school days now, and I can seperate those hours into sections. So I'll post in the RP, but as of now, I will probably only be on once a day for at least 30 minutes. I really should have done more during summer, I'm cramming all summer into a couple of days. XD
tensa-zangetsu
08-28-2008, 07:24 PM
ive been gloating about my avatar siggy combo all day... LOOK AT IT :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
Jlsloane
08-28-2008, 07:26 PM
ive been gloating about my avatar siggy combo all day... LOOK AT IT :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
Um, Tensa, this is most definitely not the place to post this. This is awfully spammish... I will not report it or anything, but I'll give you a warning.
tensa-zangetsu
08-29-2008, 01:14 AM
i realized that when it was too late to edit so im sorry
zetsuei-kanta
08-29-2008, 07:29 PM
and what i ment by the star is that it decreases my speed along with my power by half i for got to add and would u like me to make another profile? since i mest that one up post me back
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but can i post now or when?
razr4543
08-29-2008, 09:47 PM
O.k everyone,remember that little story i made up about me being the first elemental leader?Well me and QB discussed it and im now the very first leutinent and was sealed away due to me going power crazy:D
zetsuei-kanta
08-31-2008, 09:34 PM
Name: kayuki mashikage
Age:looks like a infent child but is the age of 114 Clan: Zhan shi demon
Rank: recruit
Appearance: has short white spiky hair with a little light blue and a shade of black around the back tips of the ends.
Biography: lived in darkness his whole life waiting for the time to arise again after his defeat against his father hoping he could recover his past as it was takin from him long ago (lol typical punk ). he wishes to abtain powers strong then his hoping he could become a demon prince Personality: happy go lucky, cocky when it comes to fighting, and very stubborn.
Specialties:
-hand to hand combat
-martial arts mastery
-power
-agility
sealed form: has a katar with a brightly colored large shuriken in the center
has a red thin clothe at the end of it. the katar it self is black with sharp lines and red with strafes.
released state: the katar doubles itself attaching to its users back turning into large katar wings the star strinks onto the chest of the user empowing his speed . the users body covers in darkness his eyes glowing red and black his demon arm changes into a wolf like claw and changes his clothes into a a white like suit (like a arrancar lol). Power increases largly although speed slows.
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plz reply soon i bored with fighters of kann i need somethin new so this is my chose good rp lol
Name: kayuki mashikage
Age:looks like a infent child but is the age of 104
Clan: Zhan shi demon
Rank: recruit
Appearance:
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn239/cute_lil_tobi-kun/animekid.jpg
Biography: lived in darkness his whole life waiting for the time to arise again after his defeat against his father hoping he could recover his past as it was takin from him long ago (lol typical punk ). he wishes to abtain powers strong then his hoping he could become a demon prince Personality: happy go lucky, cocky when it comes to fighting, and very stubborn.
Specialties:
-hand to hand combat
-martial arts mastery
-power
-agility
sealed form: has a katar with a brightly colored large shuriken in the center
has a red thin clothe at the end of it. the katar it self is black with sharp lines and red with strafes.
released state: the katar doubles itself attaching to its users back turning into large katar wings the star strinks onto the chest of the user . the users body covers in darkness his eyes glowing red and black. a white tatto of a skull apears on his back.
there i fixed it srry for copying the clans abilitys i didnt read the thing so now i know always read before doin something lol umm plz post me back if i can get in peace ~.~.
Jlsloane
09-01-2008, 02:58 AM
Name: kayuki mashikage
Age:looks like a infent child but is the age of 104
Clan: Zhan shi demon
Rank: recruit
Appearance:
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn239/cute_lil_tobi-kun/animekid.jpg
Biography: lived in darkness his whole life waiting for the time to arise again after his defeat against his father hoping he could recover his past as it was takin from him long ago (lol typical punk ). he wishes to abtain powers strong then his hoping he could become a demon prince Personality: happy go lucky, cocky when it comes to fighting, and very stubborn.
Specialties:
-hand to hand combat
-martial arts mastery
-power
-agility
sealed form: has a katar with a brightly colored large shuriken in the center
has a red thin clothe at the end of it. the katar it self is black with sharp lines and red with strafes.
released state: the katar doubles itself attaching to its users back turning into large katar wings the star strinks onto the chest of the user . the users body covers in darkness his eyes glowing red and black. a white tatto of a skull apears on his back.
there i fixed it srry for copying the clans abilitys i didnt read the thing so now i know always read before doin something lol umm plz post me back if i can get in peace ~.~.
Looks mostly fine to me. A few quick questions. Are you making a distinction between martial arts mastery and hand to hand combat? And secondly, I don't see any description of your released weapon's abilities... You just post a description of what you change to look like. Is gaining wings the only impact upon your combat techniques?
tensa-zangetsu
09-01-2008, 05:38 AM
plus do you mean infant? if so that would make him seem really wierd in his released state
and katar wings seem sort of wierd, not to say ur char is bad, just odd
zabimaru_08
09-01-2008, 11:56 AM
and katar wings seem sort of wierd, not to say ur char is bad, just odd
the more unique the better.
and kanta your application is fine apart from a few things.
As Jlsloane already mentioned
1. "Are you making a distinction between martial arts mastery and hand to hand combat? "
2. "Is gaining wings the only impact upon your combat techniques? "
Also i would like to ask you why you said your character looks like an infant child but in the picture of your apperance he looks about 12/13 (at least).
zetsuei-kanta
09-02-2008, 11:59 AM
Name: kayuki mashikage
Age:looks like a infent child but is the age of 104
Clan: Zhan shi demon
Rank: recruit
Appearance:
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn239/cute_lil_tobi-kun/animekid.jpg
Biography: lived in darkness his whole life waiting for the time to arise again after his defeat against his father hoping he could recover his past as it was takin from him long ago (lol typical punk ). he wishes to abtain powers strong then his hoping he could become a demon prince Personality: happy go lucky, cocky when it comes to fighting, and very stubborn.
Specialties:
-hand to hand combat
-martial arts mastery
-power
-agility
sealed form: has a katar with a brightly colored large shuriken in the center
has a red thin clothe at the end of it. the katar it self is black with sharp lines and red with strafes.
released state: the katar doubles itself attaching to its users back turning into large katar wings the star strinks onto the chest of the user . the users body covers in darkness his eyes glowing red and black. a white tatto of a skull apears on his back.
there i fixed it srry for copying the clans abilitys i didnt read the thing so now i know always read before doin something lol umm plz post me back if i can get in peace ~.~.
Name: kayuki mashikage
Age:looks like a 12 year old child but is the age of 104
Clan: Zhan shi demon
Rank: recruit
Appearance:
Biography: lived in darkness his whole life waiting for the time to arise again after his defeat against his father hoping he could recover his past as it was takin from him long ago (lol typical punk ). he wishes to abtain powers strong then his hoping he could become a demon prince Personality: happy go lucky, cocky when it comes to fighting, and very stubborn.
Specialties:
-martial arts mastery
-power
-agility
sealed form: has a katar with a brightly colored large shuriken in the center
has a red thin clothe at the end of it. the katar it self is black with sharp lines and red with strafes. the katar can fire off a red like black from the tip of the weapon.
released state: the katar doubles itself attaching to its users back turning into large katar wings the star strinks onto the chest of the user upping his agility and power. the users body covers in darkness his eyes glowing red and black. a white tattoo of a skull appears on his back.
bleach anime fan 00000000
09-03-2008, 02:01 AM
Sorry I didn't post this here, but I was on leave for the week. Can someone bring me up to date on the rp?
Jlsloane
09-03-2008, 02:09 AM
Sorry I didn't post this here, but I was on leave for the week. Can someone bring me up to date on the rp?
Well, Jerren has made a deal with Lord Vilcente (though I'm still waiting for QB to post to seal the deal...). The Velocidad are heading into the Elemental land to find Jerren, though they do not know that in the deal it was said to cut all contact from the Velocidad. In the meantime, the Rogues have snuck into Elemental land and are in the process of decimating a fortress.
bleach anime fan 00000000
09-03-2008, 02:13 AM
Alright, thanks. Nothing much has really changed since I last posted. XD
zetsuei-kanta
09-03-2008, 11:46 AM
Name: kayuki mashikage
Age:12 year old but is the age of 104
Clan: Zhan shi demon
Rank: recruit
Appearance:
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn239/cute_lil_tobi-kun/animekid.jpg
Biography: lived in darkness his whole life waiting for the time to arise again after his defeat against his father hoping he could recover his past as it was takin from him long ago (lol typical punk ). he wishes to abtain powers strong then his hoping he could become a demon prince Personality: happy go lucky, cocky when it comes to fighting, and very stubborn.
Specialties:
-martial arts mastery
-power
-agility
sealed form: has a katar with a brightly colored large shuriken in the center
has a red thin clothe at the end of it. the katar it self is black with sharp lines and red with strafes. a red black fire comes from the tip of the katars blade firing off a blast.
released state: the katar doubles itself attaching to its users back turning into large katar wings the star shrinks onto the chest of the user . the users body covers in darkness his eyes glowing red and black. a white tattoo of a skull appears on his back giving him the ability to make the tattoo come to life growing spider like legs on his back to climb walls.
umm srry for the spam post i just want to get into the rp lol looks fun to me.
zabimaru_08
09-03-2008, 11:55 AM
your application is accepted^ your commander will give you your rank.
Jlsloane
09-03-2008, 02:35 PM
Wahahahaha! Yet another addition to the now vast army of the Zhan Shi! I will give you the rank of Paravor (i.e. Elite Field Officer).
Quincyboy
09-03-2008, 03:49 PM
I know you have waaaaaaaaaaaaaaay to many.
No matter Lord Vilcente could destroy them all.
Jlsloane
09-03-2008, 04:59 PM
I know you have waaaaaaaaaaaaaaay to many.
No matter Lord Vilcente could destroy them all.
Do I take that as a challenge! But yeah, the Zhan Shi outnumber everybody by a significant margin... Not sure why, to be honest... Probably because they are most styled to seem like shinigami and this is a Bleach forum...
zabimaru_08
09-03-2008, 09:26 PM
Probably because they are most styled to seem like shinigami and this is a Bleach forum...
Yep. The original clans were slighlty different(there was 4 + rogues) but the zhan shi were always one of the clans i wanted to have, i figured it would bring in more players (for the reason you mentioned).
However i didn't predict it would outnumber the other clans this much
zetsuei-kanta
09-06-2008, 05:40 PM
hey umm were should i start off with a fellow Zhan shi or by myself and start off there.
kasai
09-06-2008, 07:46 PM
anybody else think we need more rogues?
zabimaru_08
09-06-2008, 08:28 PM
Update
There is going to be some drastic changes.
BladeBreaker (the co-host of this RP and the commander of the rogues) has left the forums.
I have already planned how to take his character out of the RP and i've contacted the people involved.
The rogues will soon become a dying race. However this doesn't mean the end of the RP...there is still going to be a few vengeful rogues left (plus a few twists and turns in the story) and the 3 true clans are close to fighting each other. So there is going to be a lot happening (probably more than before actually lol)
BladeBreaker
09-11-2008, 09:46 PM
XD, you planned on killing me off. But I ruined your devious plans by Reaturning to the forums HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!
I AM INVINCIBLE, HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!
Sorry but I couldn't resist doing that.
DanielMeister
09-12-2008, 03:40 PM
Name: Daniel Adamantiero
Age: He has the appearence of a 14 year-old boy, but his true age is of 98 years-old
Clan: Elemental Clan
Rank: I think i should be a Commander or Lieutenant level. Pretty active poster.
Appearance: http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h291/droidika/lelouch.png
[http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h291/droidika/vlcsnap-192516.jpg/SPOILER]
[SPOILER]http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h291/droidika/anger_thrills__by_Vampirella87.jpg
Biography: Daniel witnessed his whole family be murdered by demons when he was just a child. He killed the assassins with his own hands as his true powers started awakening, and since then he has become cold and detached from everyone else. Since that day, he sworn to lead an army of warriors and defeat all that stands in his way.
Personality: Daniel has an arrogant personality and a cool demeanor, staying calm in extreme situations and showing no mercy to his foes.
He is also highly inteligent and skilled in the game of chess, allowing him to use strategies to trap his opponents and defeat larger armies without much effort.
Specialties: Swordsmanship
Hand to hand combat
Agility
Stealth
Elemental Clan:
Water and Lightning are the elements controlled by Daniel. The water represents his coldness towards everyone, and the lightning represents his will to crush his enemies.
zabimaru_08
09-12-2008, 06:54 PM
DanielMeister
You need to change one small detail. The elements you can choose from are air, fire, earth and water. So you will need to swap lightning for something else, sorry.
DanielMeister
09-12-2008, 07:25 PM
Sorry i didn't know that..Then i change my elements to Air and Water :D
zabimaru_08
09-12-2008, 07:34 PM
Application accepted. Your commander(Quincyboy) will give you your rank.
Quincyboy
09-14-2008, 11:47 PM
Welcome to the valinya Meister. I grant you the rank of high ordinator which is like an officer. Any questions about the elementals just pm me.
zabimaru_08
10-11-2008, 08:17 AM
can everyone check in, i want too see who's still active.
raitoangelic
10-11-2008, 01:58 PM
Name: Kyuubi
Age: 15 (75)
Clan: Zhan Shi
Rank: Rookie, I'm new
Appearance: Hair: 2 yards in length, white
Eyes: Blue
Skin: Milk chocolate
Clothing: White Kimono
Special: One white, black tipped fox tail
Biography: A girl who lived a peaceful life who had nothing to do with the war, but when she found out that she was one of the demons who had to fight, she started to join in.
Personality: Not usually talkative, but kind and wise in battle. She spends most of her time playing her flute or drawing something. Her weapon, Sakura, is kind and generous as well, but longs for peace rather than fight. Thanks to this, she never unleashes her true power.
Specialties: Speed and Stealth
Clan specialties: A long katana named Sakura, the unsealed state is the same as Byakuya's bankai but is twice as weak. It lasts for a very short time and doesn't do that much, and nearly depletes Kyuubi's energy completely.
Jlsloane
10-12-2008, 11:43 PM
I am, kinda. I've been busy beyond belief lately, so that explains my lack of activity. I'll try to make a post tonight.
Quincyboy
10-15-2008, 12:42 AM
Ive got the same reason as my fellow commander. I'll post soon. My sincerest apologies.
Jlsloane
10-15-2008, 11:36 PM
Never mind. Due to the sheer madness of my school year, I don't think I am able to participate in this RP anymore. I am bowing out unless I give you further notice.
Quincyboy
10-16-2008, 02:30 PM
BOOOO I need you here. Perhaps it could just slow down a lot
BladeBreaker
10-16-2008, 08:08 PM
XD If it slowed down even more it's be 100% dead dude
The last post there was a few days ago
zabimaru_08
10-16-2008, 08:16 PM
Sorry but i'm closing this RP.
It's unfortunate but i think we can all agree that the story has stopped moving and there's about 3 active players left.
Thanks for playing, i hope you all enjoyed it while it lasted.
BladeBreaker
10-16-2008, 09:01 PM
Well..............This sucks. I liked this RP
zabimaru_08
10-16-2008, 10:13 PM
yeah, me too^ I put a lot into it as well
but nothing lasts forever. :D
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